Kid Comet- Wings

[KidComet]

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[BlakeJay]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

You're flow got better my man..and ya lyrical concepts on this song are better than what ive heard from you before. Not just throwin together random punchlines. 3.9/5 keep spittin like this

[KidComet]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

You're flow got better my man..and ya lyrical concepts on this song are better than what ive heard from you before. Not just throwin together random punchlines. 3.9/5 keep spittin like this

Thanks bruhhh

[kapa99]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

The beat is really nice. Nice flow too.

[Late122]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

This is the first song I've heard from you, and I can say that I really liked this! Flow is nice, but a bit boring, if u know what I mean. Lyrics are good, especially in the first verse and end of the second. Just work on the energy and you'll be good. 4/5 Good job bro!

[Alstroy]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

I very liked it and i destroyed the replay button ahem.. Errrr i'm sorry i'm not objective at all, 'cause 1) i don't use to judge and put a mark (4/5?) on a music 2) I can't rap 3) I'm (a frogy) french.But all i can say to u is keep working, i'm sure u will improve urself and do better in the future, you're very talented !

[YUNG DIEZEL]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

nice inspiring beat, i like the sample, and positive message and theme.
mixing sounds good. flow nice, and good presence.
u mentioned stopped listening to wayne and then now u listen to eminem and lupe cuz they rap about life , but wayne do too
and em rap about crazy shit like wayne too.
but i see you changin ya style now. u not gonna cus, and only doin positive songs from now on , so good luck wit it bro.

[KidComet]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

nice inspiring beat, i like the sample, and positive message and theme.
mixing sounds good. flow nice, and good presence.
u mentioned stopped listening to wayne and then now u listen to eminem and lupe cuz they rap about life , but wayne do too
and em rap about crazy shit like wayne too.
but i see you changin ya style now. u not gonna cus, and only doin positive songs from now on , so good luck wit it bro.

Thank you for the feed,

[MC_Crary]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

Deep song. This and your High School song are much better than that Based song you did some months back. Nothing stood out in the lyrics but you got your point across. Mixing was good. Don't really like the hook but Ive never been a fan of elementary choirs lol. I'm sure that's just something from the beat though. Good song though. The dope line was good but you lost it on the flow btw

[Checkmatemuzick]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

1st thing 1st this beat is crazy! I love this hook kinda addictive! Ur lryics & flow is there just bring the energy and u'll be a problem +1 but overall this is dope! Flow 4/5 Lryics 4/5 Overall 4/5 #ifukswitdis #keepgoin

[mykill]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

Flow: C
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4/5, Mixing is pretty good. A few blemishes but still good. Flow seems kind of wonky in places. Nice concept though. People 'round these parts seldom do tracks like this, so kudos for breaking the mold. You have a great voice for rap. It's unique and captivating sometimes. With some polish on your flow, this sound could be really really epic. Great job Kid!

[KidComet]

Re: Kid Comet- Wings

Flow: C
Lyrics: B-

Overall: 4/5, Mixing is pretty good. A few blemishes but still good. Flow seems kind of wonky in places. Nice concept though. People 'round these parts seldom do tracks like this, so kudos for breaking the mold. You have a great voice for rap. It's unique and captivating sometimes. With some polish on your flow, this sound could be really really epic. Great job Kid!

Aww fuck, My flow usually gets a higher grade then my lyrics do
Wtf happened to me lol