Apollo - Had A Dream

[Lord of Kaos]

This is a track of my homie Trell featuring me and another homie of mine named Wes-Nile who produced it. Trell's on the hook, and first verse. Wes-nile's on the second and I got the third. My verse could have sounded better but I just wanted to go ahead and lay my vocals down on it even though I had a fat lip (b-ball game, bad foul earlier that day lmao). Mixing/Mastering's pretty shitty on here as well, mainly because Wes-nile said he didn't feel like doing it Btw, first song I ever posted in here. We actually wrote this out back in June but never recorded it until a few days ago and I was like, "Lemme upload it and get some feedback on the verses before we re-record them." Anyway, I'm just rambling on by now lmao. Fuck with a nigga if you fuck with a nigga.


Had A Dream feat. Wes-Nile & Apollo (Prod. by Wes-Nile) by ApolloVinci on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free



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[Gibbsy]

Re: Apollo - Had A Dream

Firstly the beat is fire!! Proper raw shizz i fucks with that beat,

i like the intro part the martin luther king reference is dope!!,
first dude flow is decent, feels a lil unenergetic but lyrically its tight!!
2nd dude, sounds like hes not enjoying spittin on this at all, i mean lyrically once again its dope, but i dno the delivery just seems like its lacking alot of energy,
your on third right?, i like the lyrics they are tight to, but its the same its seems really unenergetic i mean i ent hating at all, im feeling the topic and the lyrics an the beat is fire, but when you spitting you gota put some energy in,

Overall imma give it a 4/5 because there potential for this track to be hella dope , if your going to re-record work on the delivery aspect and it will be much better .. Keep grinding homie!

[Lord of Kaos]

Re: Apollo - Had A Dream

Firstly the beat is fire!! Proper raw shizz i fucks with that beat,

i like the intro part the martin luther king reference is dope!!,
first dude flow is decent, feels a lil unenergetic but lyrically its tight!!
2nd dude, sounds like hes not enjoying spittin on this at all, i mean lyrically once again its dope, but i dno the delivery just seems like its lacking alot of energy,
your on third right?, i like the lyrics they are tight to, but its the same its seems really unenergetic i mean i ent hating at all, im feeling the topic and the lyrics an the beat is fire, but when you spitting you gota put some energy in,

Overall imma give it a 4/5 because there potential for this track to be hella dope , if your going to re-record work on the delivery aspect and it will be much better .. Keep grinding homie!

Thanks homie!

Yeah, Wes is going to be our primary DJ. He has quite a few bangers he's been making with Pro-tools and even some nice ones on FL Studio (like that one there lol). The next song I post will have been made by him as well, I think. And yeah, he didn't really want to rap but since the person who was supposed to rap second wasn't there, he just said might as well. And the first guy, Trell, he said he was just bull-shitting around since this was just the "rough-draft".

Yeah, I was third and I agree, I needed more enthusiasm and energy/life behind the words. Lyrically, it was pretty good IMO but the swollen lip and hastiness just made me rush through it and the first time it came out somewhat good, I rolled with that. smh, i feel ya doe bruh.

[Lord of Kaos]

Re: Apollo - Had A Dream

Bump-

I need some feedback on these verses folks,don't sleep on a nigga, listen and comment. ><'

[Dinho925]

Re: Apollo - Had A Dream

You have the right concept but like you said the mastering takes a lot away from your rhymes, it would boost the swag you're giving it a lot more if it was better produced good lyrics!