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  • YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

    inspired after listenin to some wayne and kanye.
    started on this song, and wanna know what yall think???
    its basically referring to how i stopped fuckin wit serious relationships becuz all the emotions and ups and downs and shit.
    thus the roller coaster metaphor.
    this just a rough draft.


    ROLLER COASTER (ROUGH DRAFT).mp3 - Hulk Share - Easy way to share your files

    lyrics:

    i feel like a king yo,
    look in out my window, lights and crescendos, flashing ups and downs
    welcome to my theme park,
    imma make u scream hard, we can do this this thang girl,
    but we aint in a dream world...... so everything is not as what it seems, but only 1 thing's guranteed........
    she said nigga what u mean???.....
    i said girl , listen here, its been a little while since i been there,
    she said where???, i said well.......... you wont understand,
    where i stand, on that land before, i took a fall alone,
    she left me hangin like a call on the phone.... when you hear that dial to the tone
    gave me the boot, i was in rome, italy
    isnt she so sweet,
    for her think that she's no thief,
    but the bitch stole heart, everything fell apart
    the part for the most is over........


    chorus:


    i dont wanna ride that roller.....coaster.....love....emotion..... pain...... strained..... brain.....broken-hearted
    before we start it, girl.....
    no i dont wanna ride that roller...... coaster.....love....emotion..... pain...... strained..... brain.....broken-hearted
    i aint trynna take that ride,
    no..... no..... no.....


    feedback:

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...met-wings.html

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post719450

    Last edited by YUNG DIEZEL; 11-15-2011, 11:08 PM.
    EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!


  • #2
    Re: YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

    this is dope as fuck, I like the way you went with the verse too. Reminds me of that Crying Out For Me remix verse, but anyway, yeah, I fucks with this heavy. hurry up and drop a mixtape, so I can download it.


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    • #3
      Re: YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

      Damn

      this is straight fire

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      • #4
        Re: YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

        with some proper mastering this could be really good.

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        • #5
          Re: YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

          Dope Bro! What effect did you use, It sounded like small auto-tune.

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          • #6
            Re: YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

            hey good one brah. its dope.

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            • #7
              Re: YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

              This is really good,
              The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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              • #8
                Re: YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

                Definetely one of the better tracks I've heard from you. Flow is very solid, though it's like your a split second too late on the delivery of the last word of some bars, sounds like a ridiculous nitpick but y'know me lol.

                Lyrically you've always stretched yourself, same again here, well done buddy.

                Only gripe is that the chorus, while not particularly terrible, isn't catchy in the slightest. However as a vibe track I'm diggin this, and your mastering has came on leaps and bounds aswell.

                Solid 4/5 from me, think it's the highest I've rated one of your tracks, not that my opinion is particularly special lol. Good work mah n3gr0
                Ziggy B



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                • #9
                  Re: YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

                  keep goin bro im diggin this. hurry and drop a mixtape.

                  YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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                  • #10
                    Re: YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

                    I didn't give you feed last time so let me do this right now

                    First of all let me tell you that I deff wanna hear the full song

                    Lyrics: B+
                    Flow: B+, Although in that chrous I think you fell off once

                    This overall was really dope though
                    The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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                    • #11
                      Re: YUNG DIEZEL - RoLLeR CoaSTeR - (ROUGH DRAFT)

                      This was ill. Was really feeling this, can't wait to hear the finished version man. Ive actually got a track in the making expressing shit like this, might hit you up when Im finished with my shit on it and see if you wanna jump on it?

                      Lyrics: 5/5, Could really feel what you were saying.
                      Delivery: 5/5, Really smooth and it made the song heaps more enjoyable.
                      Flow: 5/5, Sick man, you own this beat.
                      Overall: 5/5, Can't wait to hear the finished product.
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