Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

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First & Foremost Shoutout to Wicahpi!!!!! follow her @ErNStarz . Here is Me & her take on Hesiman by tyga and honey cocaine, just some fun shit.

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Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

No Love? .............

[pgathriller]

Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

Not diggin this one man; vocals sound like they were recorded with a horrible mic and there doesn't seem to be any processing on the vocals at all -- You're vocals and her's sound way different -- here's sound really "nasally" and thin while yours sound really muddy and distorted. Sorry man, this just needs a lot of work recording wise. Flow drags quite a bit too. Got to upgrade your equipment and really practice cause, in all honesty, this needs a lot of work; keep at it man

[@TygaHQ]

Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

Damn bro. Thanks for the feed, I really can't do too much about my mic situation at the moment, h8ow did you like it as far as lyrics go though?

[mykill]

Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

who did the intro? how old is this guy? 10? that shit Crary

Flow: C
Lyrics: D

Overall: 1.25/5, Eh. Take a bit more time to really write out what you're thinking and really get a good concept going before you just spit some random bars about every cliche from mass media rap that's going on right now. NORMALLY, I wouldnt go in.... but this shit has got me on my soapbox. Some of the punches were alright, but some of em were iffy at best. And that little kid talking about sprite and codeine and murder is more funny than it is "hard". Advice: Back up from the mic when you're recording. Hit your vocals with some EQs and Compressors to make em more crisp. If nothing else you're flow seems to be decent, just needs better recording/mixing/conceptualizing ability to get the product you want on paper.

Keep G.R.I.N.D.'n lil' homie. I'll keep checking ya out. That Imma Boss freestyle wasnt that bad.

Why is your name "Poyo"? Is it supposed to be Pollo, like spanish for Chicken? #wayconfused

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

hahaha i thought yall was gonna eat up on this track, guess not, lol ima keep working though and getting better. i love criticism only gets me more motivated to get better. Mykill since i see you tell it how it is, can i send you some tracks that havent released and you tell me if you think i should put them out. cause the last thing i want to do is release garbage and of course i think everything i drop is golden lol and so do my friends, i just want an unbiased opinion

[mykill]

Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

hahaha i thought yall was gonna eat up on this track, guess not, lol ima keep working though and getting better. i love criticism only gets me more motivated to get better. Mykill since i see you tell it how it is, can i send you some tracks that havent released and you tell me if you think i should put them out. cause the last thing i want to do is release garbage and of course i think everything i drop is golden lol and so do my friends, i just want an unbiased opinion

sure dude. ill check em out 4 u. i dont think you're bad necessarily, its just the little kid talking about hard shit just throws ya off. confusing. its like listening to lil chuckee.

[morphineroberts]

Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

Who's that lyrical Kraeyshawn? This one was a thumper... its real Crary
2 chainz on
I think I'm Tity Boi
never satisfied favorite words... give me more
Killed it

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

sure dude. ill check em out 4 u. i dont think you're bad necessarily, its just the little kid talking about hard shit just throws ya off. confusing. its like listening to lil chuckee.

you got an emaiil? and thats a girl lol, she cool tho

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

hahaha i thought yall was gonna eat up on this track, guess not, lol ima keep working though and getting better. i love criticism only gets me more motivated to get better. Mykill since i see you tell it how it is, can i send you some tracks that havent released and you tell me if you think i should put them out. cause the last thing i want to do is release garbage and of course i think everything i drop is golden lol and so do my friends, i just want an unbiased opinion

post the songs anyways man, dont hesitate and send them to mykill.
if mykill says he doesnt like them, post them anyway, because there's gonna be people that like it, as well as people who dont.
bro, i think you're dope and i like this song.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

Who's that lyrical Kraeyshawn? This one was a thumper... its real Crary
2 chainz on
I think I'm Tity Boi
never satisfied favorite words... give me more
Killed it

hahaha thanks much love bro!

[mykill]

Re: Poyo - Heisman (Feat. Wicahpi )

post the songs anyways man, dont hesitate and send them to mykill.
if mykill says he doesnt like them, post them anyway, because there's gonna be people that like it, as well as people who dont.
bro, i think you're dope and i like this song.

all true statements. you should really just post em all instead. that way you get feedback across the board.