Until The End - Ziggy B & $unnyy (Prod. Showdown)

[Z!Greatest]

Wassup people, got a new (well newish, recorded early 2011) joint between myself and $unnyy, finally got it on YouTube after losing the track for a period lol.

Track is about just keeping your head up and sticking through the bullshit til the end.

Sunny on verses 1 and 3, myself on the 2nd.

Feedback is appreciated as ever, track is below with the feedback links underneath it.

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...d-jay-bee.html

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...mple-beat.html

[pgathriller]

Re: Until The End - Ziggy B & $unnyy (Prod. Showdown)

Sunny needs to try to tighten up his rhythm, right when I heard the first line, "Until the end", I knew the flow was gonna be too loose. imo it sounds like he's trying to force the flow to have a rhythm that doesn't feel natural. Your flow is much smoother and on-beat; try to coach him to have a more natural rhythm; he seems way off (now I'm listening to his attempt at a quick flow at the open of the 3rd verse) and he just sounds like he's trying to hard. He really needs some practice paying attention to the beat and using the elements of the beat as his metronome.

[morphineroberts]

Re: Until The End - Ziggy B & $unnyy (Prod. Showdown)

$unny's verse was the stand out feature of the track... aside from the chorus.
Ziggy did his thing, the flow was a little here and there at times, but i got the gist of what he was trying to convey. The verses correlated with the chorus, and you guys stuck to the topic. I'm just glad that you guys didnt oversaturate this joint with metaphors and unnecessary verbiage. Good shit...
Who's on the chorus?

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Until The End - Ziggy B & $unnyy (Prod. Showdown)

$unny's verse was the stand out feature of the track... aside from the chorus.
Ziggy did his thing, the flow was a little here and there at times, but i got the gist of what he was trying to convey. The verses correlated with the chorus, and you guys stuck to the topic. I'm just glad that you guys didnt oversaturate this joint with metaphors and unnecessary verbiage. Good shit...
Who's on the chorus?

Which one of Sunny's verses bro? Sunny's 1st and 3rd verse, me (ziggy) am on the one verse in the middle.

Chorus is handled by Showdown of Rockitpro, beyond dope.

Thanks for the feedback bro, 'preciate it

EDIT- Thanks for the feed pga, I've relayed your feedback to Sunny

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Until The End - Ziggy B & $unnyy (Prod. Showdown)

Bump, not too many people seen this I don't think

[Cli-City]

Re: Until The End - Ziggy B & $unnyy (Prod. Showdown)

This is pretty good....Sunny was aiight..but his flow was below average...he has potential though...
the best thing about this one is the hook....great mastering of the hook....that shit is almost hypnotizing..
Ziggy B did his thing...killed it from top to bottom.......

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Until The End - Ziggy B & $unnyy (Prod. Showdown)

This is pretty good....Sunny was aiight..but his flow was below average...he has potential though...
the best thing about this one is the hook....great mastering of the hook....that shit is almost hypnotizing..
Ziggy B did his thing...killed it from top to bottom.......

'Preciate that bro, it's an old track too, only gonna improve

[SpazKS]

Re: Until The End - Ziggy B & $unnyy (Prod. Showdown)

Love the beat juuuherd!!!! need to get me on the track asap, cut a verse, send the track to my email spazzzks@gmail.com

[rip222]

Re: Until The End - Ziggy B & $unnyy (Prod. Showdown)

rhymes go like ok, but be careful with the flow, correct it
just work i bit harder
at least i see some potential