Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

[TupacShaquer]

Me and Merc are starting to work on our mixtape and sheet !

Fuck with this, I only uploaded part of my verse though
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[Gibbsy]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

the beat is tight!!, for real, i fucks with it!

The voice is kind of low bruz, its hard to pick up what your saying, turn your vocals up a little bit homie,
the flow is decent all though sometimes it seems a lil forced ? hmm i dno maybe thats just me, delivery has improved
But you really gota start feeling what your saying man, get me? like if your doing a bouncy song use your voice to get that across

neways over all man, imma give this snippet a 4/5 .. if ya turn the vocals up an sound a lil more enthusiastic this coulda be hella tight

[TupacShaquer]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

the beat is tight!!, for real, i fucks with it!

The voice is kind of low bruz, its hard to pick up what your saying, turn your vocals up a little bit homie,
the flow is decent all though sometimes it seems a lil forced ? hmm i dno maybe thats just me, delivery has improved
But you really gota start feeling what your saying man, get me? like if your doing a bouncy song use your voice to get that across

neways over all man, imma give this snippet a 4/5 .. if ya turn the vocals up an sound a lil more enthusiastic this coulda be hella tight

appreciate it and yeah ill work on it

[TupacShaquer]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

BUMPIN this shit up I want some more feedback

[Cli-City]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

Great beat....Love the Jazz influence behind of it...very dope
I don't really like the overall track though.....

Lyrics: 1/5 Honestly if this is the intro of the album you gotta strengthen it lyrically.....Also i could barely understand what you were saying , so that could've been the reason why...but I didn't hear anything worth repeating...
Flow: 3.5/5 Decent Flow.....I can hear signs of a great flow in this...keep rapping and this will improve...on the Final version experiment to see which flow fits the record best...
Delievery: I'm guess you don't have a mic, but other than that If you did it would've probably been delivered pretty decently.....

I like this as an intro...improve it lyrically...you always want your intro to be one of the strongest lyrical songs on your album because your setting the tone for every other song to come......good job though.....

[TupacShaquer]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

Great beat....Love the Jazz influence behind of it...very dope
I don't really like the overall track though.....

Lyrics: 1/5 Honestly if this is the intro of the album you gotta strengthen it lyrically.....Also i could barely understand what you were saying , so that could've been the reason why...but I didn't hear anything worth repeating...
Flow: 3.5/5 Decent Flow.....I can hear signs of a great flow in this...keep rapping and this will improve...on the Final version experiment to see which flow fits the record best...
Delievery: I'm guess you don't have a mic, but other than that If you did it would've probably been delivered pretty decently.....

I like this as an intro...improve it lyrically...you always want your intro to be one of the strongest lyrical songs on your album because your setting the tone for every other song to come......good job though.....

Thanks I really appreciate it, Especially coming from you
Yeah I'm deff going to re do this in christmas time when I get my mic

[ThaMothafuckinCarter]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

errybody be on the lookout for the full track to be droppin soon. and not kinda soon

[morphineroberts]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

The sound of this track takes me back to the windows sound recorder days... back then me and the homies would hold speaker close enough to the computer mic inorder for it to be able to catch the beat. I sucked demon testicles drinched in 5 alarm tabasco back then. I'm still not that good of rapper now. Like Cli said "I can hear signs of a flow". I also hear the enunciation conflictin with the way you guys time your breath. Sometimes less is more... and repetition makes perfection possible. Keep it going. You do better than i do now

[TupacShaquer]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

The sound of this track takes me back to the windows sound recorder days... back then me and the homies would hold speaker close enough to the computer mic inorder for it to be able to catch the beat. I sucked demon testicles drinched in 5 alarm tabasco back then. I'm still not that good of rapper now. Like Cli said "I can hear signs of a flow". I also hear the enunciation conflictin with the way you guys time your breath. Sometimes less is more... and repetition makes perfection possible. Keep it going. You do better than i do now

Lol, Yeah I'm using like a 10 dollar mic

[morphineroberts]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

You can still get the job done... I sound no better with a studio setup
wonder if i can google my old shit?

[pgathriller]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

the beat is tight!!, for real, i fucks with it!

Great beat....Love the Jazz influence behind of it...very dope

[TupacShaquer]

Re: Kage And Merc- Intro Snippet

Damn I forgot to give you props ! lol Well this is just the snippet for the next one i will