Venting: Lil Trev Feat Levi Springs

[DatWeezy]

Here is the 2nd single off my upcoming tape "Real Dreams"

This song is called venting and features one of my homies that I went to school with, fux with me and let me know what ya think. For reaall!


Venting : Link --- LimeLinx - Preview - Venting1.mp3

Feedback 1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post723128

Feedback 2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post723126

[mykill]

Re: Venting: Lil Trev Feat Levi Springs

Lil Trev // Flow: C+ // Lyrics: C-
Levi // Overall: B+

Overall: 3.25/5, Delivery needs more emotion in it. You got a very monotone, tame sound to your voice. You need to put some life in what you spit or its gonna be ignored. There were some parts in the verses where the volume dipped. Make sure to maintain steady volume and delivery when you spit your verses. Levi seems to get it a bit more than you, so listen to his and your verses on this and compare. Remember to rap like you're talking to your homie for 10 years. Dont be afraid of the mic, be a vandal.

[DatWeezy]

Re: Venting: Lil Trev Feat Levi Springs

Thanks for the feed, anyone elseee?

[Explicit]

Re: Venting: Lil Trev Feat Levi Springs

Okay. Delivery sounds really mono-tone and boring, maybe up it a bit. Make yourself sound a bit more angry or record when your angry to give your delivery a little more edge to it, then just the dull kindve delivery.

Your lyrics were pretty tight though, so just really practice on your delivery. Your flow was also pretty on point, so once you get the delivery mastered, your shit should start sounding allot more smooth and enjoyable. Also the quality was a little dull, did you mix the song at all or are the vocals just Raw?

And pretty much the same goes with Levi Springs. Keep at it guys, keep practicing! Not a bad song but not a great one either!

[morphineroberts]

Re: Venting: Lil Trev Feat Levi Springs

its real dreams (with autotune on his voice)... i lol'd before the verse started
the verses were too serious... you put it down in a way that kept my attention. Your delivery was on point like a baby issuing the blame. Levi kept the momentum going: "got me feelin like a piece of shit- the whole damn pile"
Great dynamic duo: Trackman & Homage

[DatWeezy]

Re: Venting: Lil Trev Feat Levi Springs

Thanks guys. And yea, i feel like my delivery is off on this one.... I didn't really mix it that much with vocals and stuff, plus we record on a rock band mic until christmas when I get my legit one lol. Thanks for the feed guyyss!