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  • Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

    This is the first offering from my upcoming Mixtape/Album 'Diamond In The Rough'. This is the first track that was recorded for the project. The lyrics show a sad/down kinda feel but the beat showcases a happy-ish feel too it, so its a happy/sad song.

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    [Hook:] (x2)
    I feel like I've got my back against the wall
    But when I let go i begin to free-fall
    Then I realize there was no one there at all
    Hit the ground and my only option is to crawl

    Verse 1:
    I think my minds playing tricks on me
    Each and ever day threw into the mix, opposite of tranquility
    I'm up at the sanctuary down on my knees preachin’
    I'm my own shoulder, and all I'm doing is reachin’
    Self-loathing, trying to retrieve an
    Grab my soul, cause this corpse that I'm in is greaving
    A living zombie, no emotion can be shown at all
    My flesh is a sign of corrosion, any point i could fall
    Just collapse into thin air and disappear
    Then rise from the ashes a phoenix rite here
    Amongst the mist, an on going cycle that must consist
    I was chosen to full-fill it, at the end there's no twist
    Like the ghost rider, stuck in it forever its a curse
    Darkness cleared by a lighter, life is something you can't rehearse
    And if you don't know I'm talking about depression
    Walking a lone road but I'm stuck at the intersection

    [Hook:] (x2)

    Verse 2: (Solace)
    Yo...Do you know what it's like
    To be broken at night, chokin' when you're hoping for light?
    Are you having empathy sent to me
    Put your head at ease because you wished for me rest in peace
    You think it's funny that I stay in my room
    Making a tune, to get judged everyday with the truth?
    I hate to be kid that nobody likes
    When I walk inside my school, I hope I'm holding a mic
    Not to rap, not diss, to sever a neck
    To get the respect that I reckon to get
    Every second's a mess, and I'm forever depressed
    Maybe God thinks I'm better off stressed and upset
    Every morning I paint me a smile
    I'm breaking inside though, and it takes me a while
    To get up off my ass, I think I'm losing my brain
    So don't you ask me why I'm hating every beautiful day

    [Hook:] (x2)

    Bridge:
    I’m Isolated within myself
    Within this solitary shell
    My existence is fucking fading
    It must be hard to fucking dwell
    Twitter: http://twitter.com/thisizexplicit

  • #2
    Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

    HOLY SHIT THE LYRICS WERE FUCKING EPIC
    Solace was my favorite verse though but you did good especially with the bridge at the end

    This sounds like some intelligent type rap and Thats what I love
    Lyrics:A+
    Flow: A
    Overall: 5/5, just because of its amazing lyrics,
    The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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    • #3
      Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

      i like it man.
      what kind of mic do you use btw?

      YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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      • #4
        Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

        Thank you both for dropping by and listening/feeding!

        @lilchuckieforeheadbig Just a $30 mic that I got from my local supermarket, haha!
        Twitter: http://twitter.com/thisizexplicit

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        • #5
          Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

          Originally posted by Explicit View Post
          Thank you both for dropping by and listening/feeding!

          @lilchuckieforeheadbig Just a $30 mic that I got from my local supermarket, haha!
          forreal? This quality didn't even seem that bad,
          The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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          • #6
            Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

            Dope....I like this alot.....your flow is always on point...I would comment more but this chick just knock on my door...so maybe a little later
            Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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            • #7
              Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

              Yo... this shit reminds me of Eminem's verse from "Dont Approach Me"... The lyricism made me bob my head. This is some real shit...
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              • #8
                Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

                Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
                forreal? This quality didn't even seem that bad,
                Yeah man, when I brought it I thought it was going to be shit quality but it surprised me, I guess I got lucky with it

                Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
                Dope....I like this alot.....your flow is always on point...I would comment more but this chick just knock on my door...so maybe a little later
                Thanks man!

                Originally posted by morphineroberts View Post
                Yo... this shit reminds me of Eminem's verse from "Dont Approach Me"... The lyricism made me bob my head. This is some real shit...
                Thanks for dropping in and giving it a listen
                Twitter: http://twitter.com/thisizexplicit

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                • #9
                  Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

                  This is dope man; rocked the beat amazingly -- flow is on point, nice and tight, hits on tempo nearly all places (the line "any point I could fall" sounds like it was dragging quite a bit). It's still a solid track though man, nice energy. Throw in some doubles and adlibs to accentuate the flow (The dude on the 2nd verse has a bunch of doubles and adlibs and you can really hear how it helps give the vocals some nice added presence and energy)

                  it's still a great track overall though man, great work! keep it up!
                  http://www.ATBeats.com

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                  • #10
                    Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

                    This a good track dude. Solace sounds like Coleon fused with Sentus lol. I like the hook on this one alot. Woul've liked another verse from after the bridge but I guess the beat probably ran out. Quality wasn't to bad either. You annunciated your words alot better on this one. Your verse sounded as clear as Ive heard from you. Solid track man.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

                      Tranquil // Flow: B+ // Lyrics: A
                      Solace // Flow: A // Lyrics: A

                      Overall: 4.25/5, Some minor technical blips here. Solace sounds like a Sentus/Coleon hybrid. Both of you did a wonderful job with this track. Hook is perfect. Maybe toss something on it so it doesnt just sound like another verse. Some extra reverb or adlibs or something would have made it stand out better. Outro is pretty good. Might wanna add a little bit of delay to that to give it more moody feel. Great work guys. Keep it up, do more tracks together, and keep posting!

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                      • #12
                        Re: Tranquil - Back Against The Wall (Feat. Solace)

                        Glad I wasn't the only one that noticed how Solace is Pyromaniac-esque.

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