Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

[Cli-City]

Working with my new mic, and learning how to master and record without a sound proof room and shit...I would also appreciate feedback on the clarity and anything technical....Thanks

Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

LYRICS:

Down

Parting ways with my old self
Man in the mirror look at life
Living like im on the come up ..im a beginner
winner…..from eating the same meal every night for dinner
to now getting more pussy that my grandma kitty litter
it’s a shame because the same ones who hated made it on the band wagon
a young man into a damn dragon
spitting flames I hear a beat
and go insane…propane tank for a brain
and Cli-City for a name
wait….

I solemnly swear never to sell out
Even though a nigga rap and wanna sell outs shows and arenas
Our life is a like a flash so pose when you see us
You miss out you be hard pressed clothes at the cleaners
From rolling in filas to rolling in beamas
Man I think I made…momma I think I made it
Momma your sun gon shine even though its shaded
make up for them 9 to 5’s that under compensated
I waited patiently now its my turn
My turn to show and prove…

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[TupacShaquer]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

This was really good
First of all, What mic did you use?
Second , I love your flow 4.7/5 for flow
Lyrics: A- , Overall I loved he lyrics "Life is like a flash so pose when you see us" But some of them I didn't like

Overall, Amazing track, Keep doing your thing

[Cli-City]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

This was really good
First of all, What mic did you use?
Second , I love your flow 4.7/5 for flow
Lyrics: A- , Overall I loved the lyrics "Life is like a flash so pose when you see us" But some of them I didn't like

Overall, Amazing track, Keep doing your thing

I appreciate bro...

[lilchukieforeheadbig]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

nice one man. are you using a samson microphone?

[kryspy]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

Dawg this shit is dope af!...Keep doin your thang dawg!

[akkucc]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

good one brah, but why so short??

[TyIquan]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

I fucks with it bruh...I like the beat. I actually got sumn to fit this shit perfect.

[Explicit]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

Fuck that beat is some good old-school sounding shit! Glad that some people still have the sense to pick good beats instead of the new school simplistic beats that all sound the same pretty much, so big props on that!

Your flow and lyrics were pretty sick. Maybe if you put some ad-libs in there it would make the verse stand out a bit more and make your vocals more.. bassy and powerful! Other than that cannot really criticize this song, good job man!

[morphineroberts]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

The flow was impeccable! I feel that i was cheated out of the rest of your opus though. It could've got a five from me if you would've kept the flow consistent until the end of the track, pimp. You MF Doomed this beat... but you also MF Doomed me out of the rest of what could've been an epic track. The talkin just irritated me... I was tellin myself that you had enough time to keep the flow going

I'm satisfied yet pissed off at the same time
3.5 out of 5

[Cli-City]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

The flow was impeccable! I feel that i was cheated out of the rest of your opus though. It could've got a five from me if you would've kept the flow consistent until the end of the track, pimp. You MF Doomed this beat... but you also MF Doomed me out of the rest of what could've been an epic track. The talkin just irritated me... I was tellin myself that you had enough time to keep the flow going

I'm satisfied yet pissed off at the same time
3.5 out of 5

My bad man...I got lazy...i wrote and recorded this late last night...I just said fuck it...but I will try to finish...

[morphineroberts]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

My bad man...I got lazy...i wrote and recorded this late last night...I just said fuck it...but I will try to finish...

Dont get content, Cli... when you have a good thing going you get it in until the track's end. Cut that talkin shit at the end of the track out, please. I know that you are proud that you achieve such a lyrical feat, but i feel that you could've kept it goin. People shouldnt be allowed to talk noise unless they go in for atleast 4 or 5 minutes solid... finish it up

[Cli-City]

Re: Cli-City - Down (Prod. Swiff D)

Dont get content, Cli... when you have a good thing going you get it in until the track's end. Cut that talkin shit at the end of the track out, please. I know that you are proud that you achieve such a lyrical feat, but i feel that you could've kept it goin. People shouldnt be allowed to talk noise unless they go in for atleast 4 or 5 minutes solid... finish it up

Gotcha....you rap? if so I got something brewing up..you can get in on...if you nice with it...