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    Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

    Try to ignore the bad quality on my part
    Kage And Merc- Intro(Prod By AfterTouchBeatz) - YouTube

    [1st Verse-Kage]
    This new rap game Imma' take it
    And Let the hatas watch as I make it
    I ain't rip this yet but you ain't Gonna break it
    So no worries for me, Your like a bitch without glasses Cus' you can't be seen
    Yes I'm dirty, But I'm always clean
    Me myself and I, thats the perfect team
    Throwin lyrics at you, yeah I'm pitchin
    Got that LeBron flow cus its always switchin
    My lyrics on fire where the fuckin stick
    I got more green then piccolo's dick
    And my dicks gonna feel her
    I got more kids then justin bieber
    I've done this to many times
    Yeah I rap but any bitch can rhyme
    Ain't talkin bout Nick when I say slime time
    You sure you get it hoe
    Ain't talkin bout X Factor when I say Astro
    I always go the hardest
    Ain't talkin bout Astro when I say Teenage Artist
    This just the intro, hardly
    Coverin the rap game , partly cloudy
    Fuck these bitches except sally
    Ain't talkin bout Merc when I say Cali
    Super Saiyan these bitches call me broly
    Cus we flyer then Supermans Cape,
    Kage and merc first Mixtape


    Merc -2nd Verse

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    Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

    Kage // Flow: C- // Lyrics: B
    Merc // Flow: C+ // Lyrics: B

    Overall: 3.5/5, You guys sound like you could mesh well together on the mic. I love the experimenting you are doing with different effects and what not. You gotta remember though, if the vocals dont sound right then the whole concept falls apart. Check that vocal mastering and look up some ways to improve. After that, everything you put out will be good to go. Nice work again, keep posting. Kudos.

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    • #3
      Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

      Originally posted by mykill View Post
      Kage // Flow: C- // Lyrics: B
      Merc // Flow: C+ // Lyrics: B

      Overall: 3.5/5, You guys sound like you could mesh well together on the mic. I love the experimenting you are doing with different effects and what not. You gotta remember though, if the vocals dont sound right then the whole concept falls apart. Check that vocal mastering and look up some ways to improve. After that, everything you put out will be good to go. Nice work again, keep posting. Kudos.
      Appreciate it mane, You always give good feedback
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      • #4
        Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

        The flow from is cool, but its sounded like a run on sentence kind of... Merc did thing. It was still kinda Crary though
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        • #5
          Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

          Originally posted by morphineroberts View Post
          The flow from is cool, but its sounded like a run on sentence kind of... Merc did thing. It was still kinda Crary though
          Thanks lol
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          • #6
            Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

            The flow is so smooth, I love it. You should turn the music volume little down and boost your vocals. The lyrics had good moments, like ''Me myself and I, thats the perfect team''
            EDIT: Merc also killed it, just more energy try to memerize those lyrics so it doesn't sound like your reading.
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            • #7
              Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

              Originally posted by Late122 View Post
              The flow is so smooth, I love it. You should turn the music volume little down and boost your vocals. The lyrics had good moments, like ''Me myself and I, thats the perfect team''
              EDIT: Merc also killed it, just more energy try to memerize those lyrics so it doesn't sound like your reading.
              Thanks, Appreciate it
              The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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              • #8
                Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

                Kage, I would practice a lot more before releasing more tracks. You need to get some confidence in your voice, you sound like you're whispering into the mic and if that's because of your quality then get better quality before releasing tracks. Your flow was all over the place too, I can tell you're new to rap and you're probably young so you sound the same everyone did when they first started just try really hard to get control of the beat, figuratively, before you put up anymore tracks. You don't want people listening to something like this and say you suck and never listen to you again. And I'm pretty sure Merc subliminally dissed you; Merc n' kage on the track/ Murkin Kage on the track. You need to diss his ass back

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                • #9
                  Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

                  Originally posted by Sentus View Post
                  Kage, I would practice a lot more before releasing more tracks. You need to get some confidence in your voice, you sound like you're whispering into the mic and if that's because of your quality then get better quality before releasing tracks. Your flow was all over the place too, I can tell you're new to rap and you're probably young so you sound the same everyone did when they first started just try really hard to get control of the beat, figuratively, before you put up anymore tracks. You don't want people listening to something like this and say you suck and never listen to you again. And I'm pretty sure Merc subliminally dissed you; Merc n' kage on the track/ Murkin Kage on the track. You need to diss his ass back
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                  Thanks for the feed mane !
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                  • #10
                    Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

                    both of you guys got good flow, yeah but your vocals are low compared to music. so make it little higher.

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                    • #11
                      Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

                      Originally posted by Sentus View Post
                      Kage, I would practice a lot more before releasing more tracks. You need to get some confidence in your voice, you sound like you're whispering into the mic and if that's because of your quality then get better quality before releasing tracks. Your flow was all over the place too, I can tell you're new to rap and you're probably young so you sound the same everyone did when they first started just try really hard to get control of the beat, figuratively, before you put up anymore tracks. You don't want people listening to something like this and say you suck and never listen to you again. And I'm pretty sure Merc subliminally dissed you; Merc n' kage on the track/ Murkin Kage on the track. You need to diss his ass back
                      yup you caught me thats exactly what i meant ...smh were makin a whole mixtape u really think i be dissin him haha

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                      • #12
                        Re: Kage And Merc - Intro (Prod By AfterTouchBeatz)

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