Real Dreams - Lil Trev

[DatWeezy]

Here is the title track off my upcoming tape "Real Dreams" .. This is a "Rough" version, I haven't messed a lot with audio yet! Let me know what needs fixed ! Thanks!

Real Dreams - LimeLinx - Preview - RealDreams.mp3


Feed1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post728144

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[DatWeezy]

Re: Real Dreams - Lil Trev

No Feed? Cmon..

[Late122]

Re: Real Dreams - Lil Trev

Lol, man you got so dope flow in every song I've heard. You really need to boost your vocals or reduce the beat. Btw, how you get that deep voice effect? The chorus is Dopee!

[DatWeezy]

Re: Real Dreams - Lil Trev

I do need to work on vocals, but im still on a rock band mic until christmas! That could be part the problem. The deep voice is just changing the pitch lol. Thanks for the feed man, much appreciated.

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Real Dreams - Lil Trev

Beat choice is inspired, very much "old school" hip hop style. Flow is on point throughout, nailed it like builder lol.

Lyrically, the overall theme that you went for with the lyrics was good, but I felt a lot of your lines were a little "safe", gotta inject a little more personality to make you stand out IMO, but your mic presence was strong too, which means you've got the foundations, just gotta lay the paint.

As Late122 said earlier, your voice is too low in the mix and needs a boost, but if your genuinely using a Rock Band mic then the quality isn't shabby at all, just needs a vocal raise, ad libs aswell possibly.

Overall, you have my ear, ain't heard any of your tracks up to now if you've dropped any so it was a solid first impression, well played bro.