Smokin' Part 2 - Lil Trev

[DatWeezy]

I know i posted this like a week ago but it was thrown in the trash due to my stupidity and not following the rules.. I should know them by now haha..

Anyways, here is the 3rd single off the upcoming tape "Real Dreams" that drops 1/10/11

Let me know what you think fur real

LimeLinx - Preview - SmokinPart2.mp3

Feed1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...c-r-e-a-m.html

Feed 2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...last-call.html

[DatWeezy]

Re: Smokin' Part 2 - Lil Trev

I need some type of feed! Anyone? And i meant 1/10/12... Not 2011

[DatWeezy]

Re: Smokin' Part 2 - Lil Trev

I really need some feed! Ya'll sleeepiinn

[mykill]

Re: Smokin' Part 2 - Lil Trev

Flow: C
Lyrics: D
Delivery: C-

Overall: 2.25/5, Vocals are really low through my studio monitors. For a weed song, its actually quite boring. Nothing lyrically there to make you really nod your head. Chorus/Hook is bleh, and unimaginative. Your flow at some points is really good, but in other points it loses its focus. Try to rehearse your verses more before you commit to em on the track, or at least practice some and take numerous takes. Step up your delivery and mic presence. Good beat choice. You voice meshed well with it. Just need to put in that work and you'll be golden. Cheers.

[lilwayneFAN6721]

Re: Smokin' Part 2 - Lil Trev

i thought it was catchy! the beat was nice and you kept your flow up! the beat out did your voice though. but overall it was a good song!

[Young Corruption]

Re: Smokin' Part 2 - Lil Trev

Raise your vocals some so its easier to hear. As far as lyrics they were basic and since people do a lot of weed songs you need something to stand out which you didn't do. Your flow was good and i liked it but the lyrics hindered it for me. Hook was alright at most. You do have the mastering down pretty good but thats about it. Get more comfortable on the mic and step up the lyrics and you'll be straight.