No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

[Whal3z]

No Vacation (Prod By. The Associates) (Un-Finished)

I made this while I was in private school. We had a producer who came in every Monday and Wednesday for Music and Photo appreciation. I'm really about to start taking this Rap thing seriously so let me know what yawl think about it also! 1st verse is Me (D.Whale), second verse is Chris Banks and the 3rd is Blaze.

[RiCH HOMiE QUiL]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

this is great

[mykill]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

*READ THE STUDIO RULES

First Guy // Flow: // Lyrics:...
Second Guy // Flow: // Lyrics:...
Third Guy(s)? // Flow: // Lyrics:...
Fuck it- Everyone // Flow: A // Lyrics: A-

Overall: 3.75/5, Not very fond of the "black people snatch chicken" line. Second guy's rhyme scheme got monotonous. Hook is solid. Lyrically this was pretty good. You got the equipment to keep recording? This tune was pretty catchy. Great example of a good radio track. Now go read the Studio rules about posting music, leave some feedback, and keep doing it.

[pgathriller]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

when you say a producer came in every Monday and Wednesday is he the one who made this beat?

cause the beat sounds pretty weak imo, instruments sound straight out-of-the-box and the drums are really soft, as is the bass. This really sounds like a guy starting out in FL Studio

anyway, the vocals actually have a much better quality than the beat -- they're still kinda muddy but they aren't distorting and you guys have some nice adlibs/doubles which puts the vocals at a quality higher than that of the production level of the beat. All the rappers have a nice flow, hook is nice and easy to follow, everything is pretty good vocal-wise, just need a stronger beat to terrorize!

[MC_Crary]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

HA like Black people snatch chickens. LMFAO.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

Flow - All the flows were pretty dope and unique in their own ways. 2nd verse had the best flow imo.
Lyrics - All the lyrics were pretty good, nothing too great though, besides a few witty bars here and there.
Other - This quality and track are really dope.
Overall - 4.5/5.

[Whal3z]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

#Accidental Post

[Whal3z]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

Yo !! I appreciate the feedback. I been on my grind, writing and recording. My group M.C.E.(Music Crave Entertainment) has a lot of big things planned for this summer. I'm about to post another track so if you liked this one please offer some more feedback.

[mykill]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

when you go to post that new music, make sure you're following the rules...

THA STUDIO RULES
Read 3.a-d and it'll tell you how to give proper feedback.

[@TygaHQ]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

Dope Song Bro.

[cGrumm]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

+:Flow was good from all of you. Song was catchy and kept me listening.
-: Some delivery was weak, lyrics were average. I didnt really like the chorus.
Overall: The song was pretty good, post more definitely.
3.5/5

[Whal3z]

Re: No Vacation (Listen & Rate Please)

Appreciate that bro.. Would love some more Feedback.