Rap Verse About Being Bullied

[Juzzy]

Okay I started this yesterday and finished it today. All critism is appreciated. Also, I have been writing for a while but I'm not that good, I don't even know how to use bars LOL



Everyday’s a fight, Everyday’s a struggle
Haters be hatin they tryna fuck up my style
Those motherfuckers tryna kill my smile
Ugh, they aint gonna kill my smile
They say shit about my appearance, acting like they all innocent
They don’t realise they could cause an incident
They really should be more obedient
A heart is their missing ingrediant
Its an important significance
Words can be magnificent
I wear my heart on my sleave, they should be more like me
Playing nice is the key; they should be friendly
Ugh, Treat people as if they wont be alive tomorrow
Make it a trend that everyone can follow
Remember what I just fucking said
Remember, Before it’s too late and someone ends up dead

[Late122]

Re: Rap Verse About Being Bullied

Wow that's dope and it's nice to see someone writing about bullying!! Good to see you mentioned me in that last line Have you ever thought recording a rap song?

[Juzzy]

Re: Rap Verse About Being Bullied

Wow that's dope and it's nice to see someone writing about bullying!! Good to see you mentioned me in that last line Have you ever thought recording a rap song?

Yes, but I don't have a mic. Hoping to get one soon

[DustinKPinson]

Re: Rap Verse About Being Bullied

It's a really good verse, I had a little kid in my grade threaten to bring a shotgun to school one time and shoot me lol, so I think I was on the other end of this to be honest. Wouldn't do it now, but I thought it was hilarious at the time. I can relate to the emotion, though.

[ProBitaz.]

Re: Rap Verse About Being Bullied

Not bad at all, I digg this bruh!

[Juzzy]

Re: Rap Verse About Being Bullied

Thanks for all the positive feedback guys May edit this, make a few more verses and see if I can get a mic

[Pestrator]

Re: Rap Verse About Being Bullied

i really like this man