HYFR Freestyle

[SerjTank]

Did a quick little HYFR session, don't think it came out too bad. Feedback appreciated.

-Merry Christmas HQ


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[Flame Beats]

Re: HYFR Freestyle

you have no passion. flow's sloppy. Good instrumental though--that was the only positive thing I could think of...

[mykill]

Re: HYFR Freestyle

Flow: C
Lyrics: C-
Delivery: C

Overall: 3.25/5, Need better delivery. Some of the flow aspects of this were pretty good though, just needed a better delivery to carry em through the track. Like the previous guy said, you need more emotion/feeling/passion in what you spit. I dont know what software you're using, or if you not using a high-grade mic, but try to clean up the vocals some so that they stand out better and are more clear. Use an EQ and a Compressor VST or something to get things to pop out better. Good job none the less.

[Late122]

Re: HYFR Freestyle

The quality isn't good. Have you mixed this? You have improving in delivery, you have to add energy sounds like you have just woken up. The flow could be smoother but it's the best thing in this song IMO. Lyrics alright. 3/5 Better mixing + new mic + energy.

[SerjTank]

Re: HYFR Freestyle

Hell yeah, thanks for the critique guys. I was on a shitty mic over vacation and just went in w/o much effects. Getting a new mic soon. Can you suggest the effects or EQ settings you use @mykill ? your vocals are always on point, I just want some better quality in my freestyles.

[WeeZF]

Re: HYFR Freestyle

not bad bro, i just feel like you need to sound a little more alive, more into it! Take Pride In Ur Lyrics!
Also You're Delivery Could Be Better, But Nonetheless, Keep Doing Ya Thing!