MC_CRARY-MC_Crary World Order [Album]

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY-MC_Crary World Order [Album]

Thanks for the feed man. All of the things you said are on the to-do list. I really appreciate your time man.

*By the way John Dare is the hippie on the hook, hitting the pipe and saying "That's some heavy shit man."

[Cli-City]

Re: MC_CRARY-MC_Crary World Order [Album]

1. Gangsters Paradise – Production on this joint is crazy….great way to start the album…..Who is that saying Mc_Crary? Lol Nicks?.....I felt like you couldn’t spit all the way through on this one…that pause left me wanting for more…Lyrically, you were convincing on this one…..this songs puts me in a great mood to hear the album….The commentary at the end does it for me…your great flow wasn’t as evident on this one….(8/10)

Best Line - “everything I say is a true story, you feel me….MC CRARY World Order Welcome”
2. Kill-a Nigga Bizness – ID labs did their thing on this one…gawd damn..that beat sounds so glorious…….lyrically this one is just ok….The beats does it for me though…I couldn’t really follow this song..does it have a hook..and just sounds like a bunch of rambling on a dope beat….TBH…(5/10)
Best Line - "She must be Wonder woman how she make my dick invisible, all the way down her throat"

3. Me against the Word – 3/3 in production so far…great….Love the Hook on this shit….Love the way you started this one…”Only God can judge my ambitions as a rider”..real shit…..Lyrically this is what I want to hear from McCrary..dope ass lyrics over dope production…this one is a winner….should’ve hit me on this one…I love this shit….(9/10)
Best Line – “Only God Can judge my ambitions as a rider” – Dope Ass Line

4. Beasting – I wish you did a little more with this hook…it had real potential…not really feeling this production….but the energy on this ones comes at the right time on this project….(wish the beasting remix happened though)..lol (6/10)

5. Chilling With The Chief – This one sounds like a monster…..
“I Just be chilling with the chief”….I can fuck with this…you could’ve bodied this a bit more though…you killed it but its not buried….great flow on this one…..(7/10)

6. Another Nigga’s Bitch – Not liking the bounce on this one..this is probably the weakest track so far…lyrically it sounds bungled up…This one could’ve been left off….(3/10)

7. Substitute – I like this one a lot….smooth ass production…dope concept on this one…you experimented a lil with your flow on this and it’s a great step away from your usual…..(7/10)...
“Just call me when you need a substitute”…I can fuck with this

8. She Coulda Had Me – Three songs in a row for the feeling and this one comes in second to “Substitute”…I wish you took on of them songs and threw a dope concept on it….Lyrically this one is dope….production is the best out of all three lady songs so far…..Flow is impeccable…that shit is too easy when it comes to the flow for you and its evident…(7/10)

9. Money & Women – This one started off dope as fuck..”money and women, power religion, death and decision…..I like this joint…Prod. is aiight nothing too speacial…its good you strayed a little off the girl subject on this one a bit….3 songs in a row is enough….dope lyrics on this one……flow is impeccable of course…HOOK does it for me on this one…..Im still repeating this shit….(7.5/10)

10. Holden Caufield – I FUCKS WITH THIS!....favorite track so far apart from Me Against the world….the production on this one puts me in a zone…..bright spot on the mixtape so far is that you are riding alone with shows strength…..Story telling comes out on this and that is a breath of fresh air on the album….great vibe….flow was sick on this…just flowed and let the beat body itself….(9/10)

11. Catcha Freeman ft JR Nickz – ID LABs knocked this shit out of the park…my favorite Mac track…great concept….first verse was strong and a great way to start this song….Hook is what does it though….”If you love your life obey the law of the land motherfucker wanna catcha Freeman”…2nd verse is just as strong as the first…..J R Nickz did this shit justice…I like the approach he took…and he had the best verse….but all verses were dope…(10/10)….
“If you love your life, obey the law of the land these motherfuckers wanna catcha freeman”

12. Heavy ft John Dare – Love the Obama commentary…Mc Crary I like you on these concept tracks…..you shine..and your lyrics are more focused….This is another gem…and one of the best on the album..I love intelligent rap…shows that you listen and observe and can relate it to your audience…….(9/10) I didn’t hear John Dare though…

13. Can I Kick It – Oh yea…this one has an old school vibe to it..and it sounds like three gems in a row…Lyrically probably the best show on the album so far….flow wise you shine again…..”Can I Kick It”…..love the hook….(9/10)

14. My World ft Mykill – Another Dope Production….love mykill and the vocals on this one…really wanted a mykill verse on this…but he does his job…a solid joint…..(8/10)

15. Menace II Society – beat a little funky on this one …but it works…by this time even though I like your flow a lot…I wish you would switch it up a bit…..Hook on this one could’ve been better…but I like where you were going with it…..(6.5/10)

16. Tripping ft Cli-City – I had this song for so long I know it by heart….Bias exists here..(10/10)…….

17. HMM ft. JR Nickz & Mykill – Nickz sounds weird on this…but he comes in like a killer…and bodies that shit…. “leave your ass laying a pool of blood you better win”..I love this song….McCrary…you bodied this shit…gawd damn…..but Mykill stole the show on this one….Breath of fresh air…maybe because he is my favorite rapper on HQ…but he killed that shit…..I wish I got invited on this one…..(10/10)

“I see a fucking red door and all I want to do is paint it black” – Dope
18. Great way to end……Love the biology reference since I have a bachelors in Bio..lol…great way to end…a fun way out…and I fuck with it (8.5/10)

overall I would give this a (7/10)..The great songs are really great and the bad ones are average…flow is impeccable…and lyrics are good enough that this mixtape was enjoyably…keep doing your thing homie…a lot of talent….I would like to see you on some more concept tracks though…you shine on those types…..

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY-MC_Crary World Order [Album]

I remember when I wrote Another Niggas Bitch (first song I wrote for the album actually). I thought it was my best shit ever. The concept couldve been played out a lot better I think. Ive always had this problem with niggas gettin mad that they're women wanna come smoke with me. Is it my fault my shit's better lol? Anyway I guess it turned to be the weakest track, as far as reviews go. Thanks for the feed Cli. Lets get some more.

[jrnickz]

Re: MC_CRARY-MC_Crary World Order [Album]

The line is leave ur ass Layin n a pool of blood u better swim. Yea don't know y I sound so off on this one. That's been my prob lately not liking the way my voice sounds. Trying new flows tho so we'll c. Preciate the positive feed tho cli. Still waiting on in my own words.