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    Aristotle and Socrates in this bitch while I'm Shakespeare at the same time, I blow minds. Time pfft I show up when I arrive, push me girl I take lives. Wives? I feel like every bitch is mine. Don't listen to shit just let em lie, no denial, I'll put this world on trial. Watch as it burns without a concern, fools shoulda already learned.


    Stomp a lion without a concern, ten legs meet two fists, cut you up like a suicidal niggas wrists. Eat the heart out, steal it's courage, sleepy nope I manage. Attack the beat like a savage michael myers flow straight scary, love me or hate me better respect me I've fought worse bbbbb iiiittchhh.. Snitch on me? Lord as my witness you might as well already be ditched. Dexter in this motherfucker no evidence.

    All fear no love hate me either way it's not a concern, cause I laugh as anyone burns. Thunderous voice, lord of the mike, don't need a choice I decide bitch. Devil come try me, I'm born free, born to lead, charismatic is my characteristic indeed. Feed of belief love or hate so whatever he makes the world up can't take shit from the man. Mr game plan check check check the field make a meal of manning.


    Peyton tell that bitch pay me, leak flow faster the katrina. I'll hit this world put the fear of God into mankind, New Orleans bitch we got Mardi Gras down the road. Mr wayne carter thinks he's a little smarter, three steps ahead of his stupid barter, Bible as the carter hahaha....right.... Guy sounds like a joke black man meet mr white, dance around like a kite while I smite from all sides. Ten legs still can't keep up with this man, no fan, but I blow smoke as I take land. Ain't going no where sometimes I feel like a plant.


    So high I'm galactic, treat stars like magic, poof poof boom another race is tragic. Milky Way iiiiiiii'''''''''mmmmmmm back, gonna attack the ghetto like crack, bitches get out the way or get smacked. Guns fuck that I'm law, call me strong armed, disarm any man beat up bruce lee as I take on ali. CAUSE K FOR KING BITCH I'M THE GREATEST.


    I'm not earning a damn because thing feel like I already made it. Take the heart out a vampire as I stave it, wirey don't try me I see your fear, looking like a deer in my headlight. Fuck this heaven bound hound I'll laugh as I turn him back around. Heaven's might, cannot compare my game is too tight, bitches follow me like light. Glowing yezzir twist up as I'm rolling leaves them as ashes in my dust as I'm going.


    No joking I can do this 24 hours all day even 7 times a night, one week fool get it right. This world won't even know what hit them when I strike. I eat martians for breakfast, put them on the table, add a little maple. Leg open his bitch like my e-go oh no, flow gone, think I lost control!


    Lost my mind, guess it wasn't necessary this time hahaha motherfucker already looking fried. Tried to help, oh well, too swell, no beaver in this motherfucker. Go jason and chop niggas with a cleaver, b b b butcher I've been meager. I ain't taking shit from no supposed leader, got beef I'll cook it up, sizzle that bacon, just fry that pig up.


    Remix round 2 and I ain't playing this time around, about to take over the whole town. Test Test Testify against me? Be the last words you ever breathe. Burn you alive like a dead leave, shut up bitch ya really, please!

    Sure there's a song in there somewhere, the text just happens when I copy and paste. Told yall lil wayne was my inspiration lol, love that guy.

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    Re: Freestyle that will probably make it to a mike.

    The flow turns to be boring to me, perhaps if you rap it out of a beat it gets better but it seems like a bunch of independent punchlines for me tho they ain't that bad. Just an opinion anywayz.

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    • #3
      Re: Freestyle that will probably make it to a mike.

      Originally posted by ArTC View Post
      The flow turns to be boring to me, perhaps if you rap it out of a beat it gets better but it seems like a bunch of independent punchlines for me tho they ain't that bad. Just an opinion anywayz.
      That's honestly why I type it first, because then I can cherry pick it and make a better story.

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      • #4
        Re: Freestyle that will probably make it to a mike.

        That's a good technique, Fiddy once said he starts writing a hook and then ends up with a complete song. I really liked the sixth one and the eighth, they are the most real IMO.
        Go and check my stuff from writer's block if you feel like doing it later I need opinions.

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          Re: Freestyle that will probably make it to a mike.

          Originally posted by ArTC View Post
          That's a good technique, Fiddy once said he starts writing a hook and then ends up with a complete song. I really liked the sixth one and the eighth, they are the most real IMO.
          Go and check my stuff from writer's block if you feel like doing it later I need opinions.
          The hook kinda establishes the story so I'd imagine it works for most people, i tend to just write it then pick out a verse to be a hook that goes with the whole song lmao.

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          • #6
            Re: Freestyle that will probably make it to a mike.

            Originally posted by DustinKPinson View Post
            The hook kinda establishes the story so I'd imagine it works for most people, i tend to just write it then pick out a verse to be a hook that goes with the whole song lmao.
            Always better writing the hook on it's own bro.
            Ziggy B



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            • #7
              Re: Freestyle that will probably make it to a mike.

              Originally posted by Z!Greatest View Post
              Always better writing the hook on it's own bro.
              If you can't wing a hook you can't freestyle... My whole song's the hook anyways . Hooks just appear like magic in my music lmao.
              So high I'm galactic, treat stars like magic, poof poof boom another race is tragic. Milky Way iiiiiiii'''''''''mmmmmmm back, gonna attack the ghetto like crack, bitches get out the way or get smacked. Guns fuck that I'm law, call me strong armed, disarm any man beat up bruce lee as I take on ali. CAUSE K FOR KING BITCH I'M THE GREATEST.

              see take out the first line and repeat the K motherfucker I'm great a few times, boom hook in the middle of a freestyle and I'll just repeat it.... Better yet switch the last line for the first then repeat the first at the end.... hahaha told you motherfucka the hook was there all along.
              Last edited by DustinKPinson; 01-03-2012, 04:55 AM.

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