Poyo - Its Good Freestyle

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Havent Released Anything In A While So I Decided To Drop A Track For My Bday. Something Slight Wit My Lil Bro Teeda. Enjoy.

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[kryspy]

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Dawg you should get a better mic. Once you do that, your songs should be straight. Your flow was slippin at times but not much. Besides that, it was decent. 2.9/5

& Happy Birthday, btw

[KidComet]

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Cliche rapper, nuff said.

But I give it a good 3/5

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

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Dawg you should get a better mic. Once you do that, your songs should be straight. Your flow was slippin at times but not much. Besides that, it was decent. 2.9/5

& Happy Birthday, btw

I Know I want a studio mic but them bitches expensive lol, thanks on the feed tho. And thanks on the birthday wishes lol. niggas gettin old lls

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Cliche rapper, nuff said.

But I give it a good 3/5

Respect. How Am I Cliche?

[KidComet]

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I Know I want a studio mic but them bitches expensive lol, thanks on the feed tho. And thanks on the birthday wishes lol. niggas gettin old lls

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Respect. How Am I Cliche?

Thats just me in my eyes,
rapping about smoking weed fucking bitches, etc.
like every other rapper out there.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

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Thats just me in my eyes,
rapping about smoking weed fucking bitches, etc.
like every other rapper out there.

I Feel you but i rap what i know. i smoke alot of weed and i fuck bitches.

[RIOT]

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Cliche rapper, nuff said.

But I give it a good 3/5

I agree with this. I think the world has enough of these "smoke weed all day and fuck bitches" rappers. Nothing against you man, I just think you can be more original than that. You have some good lines, so I'm gonna give it a solid 2.5/5.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

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I agree with this. I think the world has enough of these "smoke weed all day and fuck bitches" rappers. Nothing against you man, I just think you can be more original than that. You have some good lines, so I'm gonna give it a solid 2.5/5.

Respect. Ima work on being more versatile in the future, but like i said i rap mostly about what i live.

[Cli-City]

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Not having a mic affected you alot on this.....generic lyrics but lets be honest who doesnt rap about that now a day..no condemnation from me....
2.5/5 ......Keep rhyming..it can only help you...

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

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Not having a mic affected you alot on this.....generic lyrics but lets be honest who doesnt rap about that now a day..no condemnation from me....
2.5/5 ......Keep rhyming..it can only help you...

Respect Bro, Just wondering what do yall want to rap about??? i rap about what i know, my life style.

[mykill]

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Respect Bro, Just wondering what do yall want to rap about??? i rap about what i know, my life style.

Poyo // Flow: B+ // Lyrics: C- // Delivery: B-
Teeda // Flow A- // Lyrics: C- // Delivery: B+

Overall: 2.25/5, Sorry.... but.... You're like what? 15? and you're talking about all you do is fuck bitches and smoke weed and kill people? b real. You have a good delivery and flow, but a I have to agree with people - you ain't sayin' nothin. As far as a lyrical prowess goes, you dont really have anything there that's not already in 99% of the people already out there and 99.9% of stuff you hear on the radio. If you're gonna do raps like that, at least make em sound good (a la Rick Ross). Better mixing will do you some serious help. Get a cleaner sounding mic. Work on saying that stuff a lot better, and in a better variety of ways. If you're a boss, then think of 1000000 ways to say you're a boss and it'll make it sound better than just "im a boss, bitch".

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

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Im 18 bro and im not all i do is smoke weed and fuck bitches but thats a heavy influence in my life lol. like you said i just need to express that in a way that no one has before and thats ultimately my goal. I mean i just started rapping 2 months ago im still tryn find my sound thats why most of my songs have different flows im still tryn see what works ans what people like. I appriciate the critisicm though and i hope you enjoy my future songs.

btw, i have never killed anybody lol