Fuck feedback

[YUNG DIEZEL]

yeah if you aint know, my music recording shit got stolen, so i guess imma be in writers block from time to time when i get the urge to rap and shit since i cant record anymore.
this just some shit i freestyled..........



KISS MY ASS AND CALL IT FEEDBACK,
NIGGA I DONT NEED THAT, CATCH ME AT THE OPPOSITE END OF THE WEED SAC,
THEN RELAPSIN, NOW IM ASKIN WHERE THE WEED AT,
WHEN I RAPPED NIGGAS SAID I SOUNDED LIKE 3 STACKS......
AM I PAID??? NAH THEY WAS TALMBOUT ANDRE, SOME EVEN SAID I WAS KINDA LIKE A YOUNG WAYNE
STUPID MONEY...................... DUMB PAID,
"YOU GON' KILL US ONE DAY"...... THATS WHAT MY LUNGS SAY,
BUT NOW IM DONE WIT THE FUN DAYS, ITS A DAMN SHAME
HOW MUCH OF THAT DAMP CAME FROM THE DAMN RAIN??,
WASNT IN THE TENT, BUT WAS WINNIN THE CAMPAIGN, THATS WHEN THE PAIN CAME
ITS A DAMN SHAME
BUT FUCK THAT,
ENJOY MY PRESENCE WIT NO PAPER, LIKE FUCK RAP
MC HAMMER WIT THE GRAMMER , YOU CANT TOUCH THAT,
SO I FUCK AROUND AND WRITE IN ALL CAPS,
NO NICKOLODEON SHOW , BUT IM ALL DAT ,
FLOW FREEZING, YOU DONT WANNA TEST THE COLD LIKE BALL SACKS,
FALL BACK, IM ABSTRACT LIKE AZTECS
NIGGAS TAKIN SHOTS AND THEY DONT EVEN HAZ TECHS
YOU DONT WANNA FUCK WIT ME LIKE WE PREVIOUSLY HAD BAD SEX...........

..............more freestyles comming soon..................

[-_-]

Re: Fuck feedback

yeah if you aint know, my music recording shit got stolen, so i guess imma be in writers block from time to time when i get the urge to rap and shit since i cant record anymore.
this just some shit i freestyled..........



KISS MY ASS AND CALL IT FEEDBACK,
NIGGA I DONT NEED THAT, CATCH ME AT THE OPPOSITE END OF THE WEED SAC,
THEN RELAPSIN, NOW IM ASKIN WHERE THE WEED AT,
WHEN I RAPPED NIGGAS SAID I SOUNDED LIKE 3 STACKS......
AM I PAID??? NAH THEY WAS TALMBOUT ANDRE, SOME EVEN SAID I WAS KINDA LIKE A YOUNG WAYNE
STUPID MONEY...................... DUMB PAID,
"YOU GON' KILL US ONE DAY"...... THATS WHAT MY LUNGS SAY,
BUT NOW IM DONE WIT THE FUN DAYS, ITS A DAMN SHAME
HOW MUCH OF THAT DAMP CAME FROM THE DAMN RAIN??,
WASNT IN THE TENT, BUT WAS WINNIN THE CAMPAIGN, THATS WHEN THE PAIN CAME
ITS A DAMN SHAME
BUT FUCK THAT,
ENJOY MY PRESENCE WIT NO PAPER, LIKE FUCK RAP
MC HAMMER WIT THE GRAMMER , YOU CANT TOUCH THAT,
SO I FUCK AROUND AND WRITE IN ALL CAPS,
NO NICKOLODEON SHOW , BUT IM ALL DAT ,
FLOW FREEZING, YOU DONT WANNA TEST THE COLD LIKE BALL SACKS,
FALL BACK, IM ABSTRACT LIKE AZTECS
NIGGAS TAKIN SHOTS AND THEY DONT EVEN HAZ TECHS
YOU DONT WANNA FUCK WIT ME LIKE WE PREVIOUSLY HAD BAD SEX...........

..............more freestyles comming soon..................

lol.... nothin but respect for the hustle.....continued hustle.......i truly believe theres a reason for everything. dont nobody kno how you feelin right now but my nigga you gotta look at it like this, theres a big chance it made you a better rapper....I'm not sayin losin $$ should happen!! but maybe this particular event needed to happen for you to finally snap in the booth!!! but uh....whoever took yo shit stay by you......well it coulda been anybody but I think its somebody that you know because you said you left stuff out there couple times right???that aint no random criminal.....they was watchin you frm they window and plottin....i think....you said neighbors can see you right??? smh idk man theres a reason for everything....even if you had to take the loss this time!! I can tell from this freestyle you more aggressive! FROM THE FIRST LINE!!! you good man...if you decide to get back in it, you gon be a beast forreal

[DustinKPinson]

Re: Fuck feedback

yeah if you aint know, my music recording shit got stolen, so i guess imma be in writers block from time to time when i get the urge to rap and shit since i cant record anymore.
this just some shit i freestyled..........



KISS MY ASS AND CALL IT FEEDBACK,
NIGGA I DONT NEED THAT, CATCH ME AT THE OPPOSITE END OF THE WEED SAC,
THEN RELAPSIN, NOW IM ASKIN WHERE THE WEED AT,
WHEN I RAPPED NIGGAS SAID I SOUNDED LIKE 3 STACKS......
AM I PAID??? NAH THEY WAS TALMBOUT ANDRE, SOME EVEN SAID I WAS KINDA LIKE A YOUNG WAYNE
STUPID MONEY...................... DUMB PAID,
"YOU GON' KILL US ONE DAY"...... THATS WHAT MY LUNGS SAY,
BUT NOW IM DONE WIT THE FUN DAYS, ITS A DAMN SHAME
HOW MUCH OF THAT DAMP CAME FROM THE DAMN RAIN??,
WASNT IN THE TENT, BUT WAS WINNIN THE CAMPAIGN, THATS WHEN THE PAIN CAME
ITS A DAMN SHAME
BUT FUCK THAT,
ENJOY MY PRESENCE WIT NO PAPER, LIKE FUCK RAP
MC HAMMER WIT THE GRAMMER , YOU CANT TOUCH THAT,
SO I FUCK AROUND AND WRITE IN ALL CAPS,
NO NICKOLODEON SHOW , BUT IM ALL DAT ,
FLOW FREEZING, YOU DONT WANNA TEST THE COLD LIKE BALL SACKS,
FALL BACK, IM ABSTRACT LIKE AZTECS
NIGGAS TAKIN SHOTS AND THEY DONT EVEN HAZ TECHS
YOU DONT WANNA FUCK WIT ME LIKE WE PREVIOUSLY HAD BAD SEX...........

..............more freestyles comming soon..................

Message me back, I'll send you some real beats so you have something to use. My boy can make 15 a day if I ask him to. I can tell just by reading your shit you'll be able to use it, because he slows it down drops it switches from hard as a motherfucker to girl like it's nothing, and it all blends together. First beat he ever made I sat there and just laughed at how ridiculously good it was. It really sounds like an alien made it no jokes.

Oh since you did it to me...

Bad sex with me bitch please eat pussy like bird seed,
Already said you're broke, what a joke,
Relapse bitch I live in addiction,
Get high on my supply, then take others when it's dry,
No deny, diesel's a train,
But I really think he might have lost his brain,
Untamed, wild, live like a child,
No mild shit here bitch rhythm like a black,
Stop this train in it's track,
Oh I'm sure you know pain,
I grew up in hell and since I've never been the same,
Fame shit I'm already on top of my game,
Try and kill me bitch I'm free,
Eternally sound, feel the Savior in me,
I do cold in a t-shirt, bitch you're sounding old.
Fuck diesel everything I write is gold,
Fold em cause we know you're not paid,
Gambling man nah I'm fuckined layed......back
Test me again bitch meet the smack.

[Z!Greatest]

Re: Fuck feedback

Sorry to hear about your equipment, that's gotta be shit for anyone man.

Decent verse though. Scatty but decent.