Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

[BlakeJay]

Another one from me and Unique..Enjoy (from the mixtape, in case you didnt hear it)

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[TyIquan]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

Which is you? Both of yaw dope fa real. The first verse was a lil too conscious for my tastes, but I see the talent. I fucks with the second verse.

Hard to explain what I mean, but I'm not a critic either.

[BlakeJay]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

Which is you? Both of yaw dope fa real. The first verse was a lil too conscious for my tastes, but I see the talent. I fucks with the second verse.

Hard to explain what I mean, but I'm not a critic either.

Yeah thats me on the first verse..I understand tho, i do the conscious type of verses from time to time for the people who enjoy that type of rap ( like me)..Thats my man Unique on the second verse..Thank you for the feedback!

[Blunt.Blowin.]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

Damm - Fire Flame Spittah !! =)

[jrnickz]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

Loved it my dude. I ain't really fuck wit unique verse to much but keep that conscious shit up its good to c sumbody spitting from there heart and not a fucking script with an image there trying to portray. Its as if we're getting a feel of u and the thoughts that plague ur mind from the day to day. I really enjoyed it. U gotta fan n me pimp

[Late122]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

You have a nice flow. The 'subliminal lyrical' line sounded like from shady's BET cypher but was nice. The beat is too hot. My ears love the way you rhyme words and the lyrics. The second guy sounds like he was recording in a fucking professional 100k Dr. Dre's studio! Nice use of effects and he sounds like C Breezy. I like this song. 4,5/5 because it was too short.

[DatWeezy]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

Damn bro! This shit dope, I enjoy the "REAL" verses. We need more of that. Lyrics are dope as fuck, and I love your flow. I don't know what it is but the way you put the words together are dope man. Keep it up, follow your dreams my kid! You got potential! I mean that!

[BlakeJay]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

Loved it my dude. I ain't really fuck wit unique verse to much but keep that conscious shit up its good to c sumbody spitting from there heart and not a fucking script with an image there trying to portray. Its as if we're getting a feel of u and the thoughts that plague ur mind from the day to day. I really enjoyed it. U gotta fan n me pimp

Thank you my man..that means alot that people like you enjoy the "Conscious" verses as well as the real raw rap..Appreciate dat

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You have a nice flow. The 'subliminal lyrical' line sounded like from shady's BET cypher but was nice. The beat is too hot. My ears love the way you rhyme words and the lyrics. The second guy sounds like he was recording in a fucking professional 100k Dr. Dre's studio! Nice use of effects and he sounds like C Breezy. I like this song. 4,5/5 because it was too short.

lol it does sound like that Eminem line now that i think about it...But i recorded this before i saw that and yeah i mixed Uniques verse way better than mine lol idk why..Thank you for the feedback my dude

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Damn bro! This shit dope, I enjoy the "REAL" verses. We need more of that. Lyrics are dope as fuck, and I love your flow. I don't know what it is but the way you put the words together are dope man. Keep it up, follow your dreams my kid! You got potential! I mean that!

Thanks for enjoying those "Real" verses lol..people like yall inspire me to keep right the Real verses even tho everybody doesnt really feel that..Appreciate it!

[Sentus]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

First verse was great, one of the best verses I've heard on here in a grip. Only problem with it for me was the mixing. I can't really pinpoint what it was but something was bothering me the whole time. You either had too much echo when you recorded or put on too much reverb for my taste. If you cleaned that up and had a more clear sound it would have been much better. I understand that's easier said than done though because I fuck that up on every song. Just keep workin, I can't remember if I've ever listened to you before but you have potential.

I didn't like the second verse much because it didn't even seem like a verse...I thought he was just talking leading up to his verse and was waiting for it to start and then the song ended.

[BlakeJay]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

First verse was great, one of the best verses I've heard on here in a grip. Only problem with it for me was the mixing. I can't really pinpoint what it was but something was bothering me the whole time. You either had too much echo when you recorded or put on too much reverb for my taste. If you cleaned that up and had a more clear sound it would have been much better. I understand that's easier said than done though because I fuck that up on every song. Just keep workin, I can't remember if I've ever listened to you before but you have potential.

I didn't like the second verse much because it didn't even seem like a verse...I thought he was just talking leading up to his verse and was waiting for it to start and then the song ended.

I appreciate the feedback..and yeah the first verse (which is me) was recorded a long time ago when i wasnt as good with mixing as i am now..the second verse was recorded recently (which is my man Unique) and i mixed that one alot better..Thanks for the props on the verse tho

[MC_Crary]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

This was one I checked out on the mixtape. Blake your rhyme schemes on this one work perfectly with you flow. You rode the beat all the way through. I love the concept of you guy's tape, perfectly explains your place right now. I really hope something happens for you guys. Y'all are some of the greats around here.

[BlakeJay]

Re: Blake Jay - Enchanted (remix)

This was one I checked out on the mixtape. Blake your rhyme schemes on this one work perfectly with you flow. You rode the beat all the way through. I love the concept of you guy's tape, perfectly explains your place right now. I really hope something happens for you guys. Y'all are some of the greats around here.

yeah I knew only a few people heard the tape and I like this verse alot so I threw it up here..thanks for that feedback man, means alot..hopefully we can all make it to the top lol..and thank you for checkin out the mixtape