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    Poyo - Peso Freestyle - YouTube

    Not even gonna lie im really feelin this one right here lol. this is the first i didnt actually write, i did the lil wayne approach just recorded lil sections as i thought of it. Enjoy

    Oh and Here's The Chopped But not Screwed Version. I was originally just gonna put this version out but the people i showed seemed to like my normal voice better.
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mO9MhiRGAVM

    Follow me https://twitter.com/#!/Poyo_Kardashian

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    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...a-y-u-mad.html

    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-lil-trev.html
    Last edited by @Poyo_Kardashian; 01-12-2012, 03:37 AM.
    twitter.com/basedpoyo

  • #2
    Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

    Flow: B+
    Lyrics: C-

    Overall: 3.75/5, Actually was pretty nice. Flow was on point for a majority of it. Good delivery as well. Lyrics were iffy, but it wasnt the cut & paste technique that took away from them. It was more of a lack of content. But you flow/delivery well, you just need to work on your punches and lyrics over a bit more. Nice Work!

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    • #3
      Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

      I like the flow. Actually really much. Nothing special about the lyrics. That sound at 0:30 killed my ears ! I would like to hear a song of you with more energy. Overall 3,5/5
      ' It's a fucking work-out, when I bring the work out'


      + Flow
      + Tempo changing
      - Sound effects
      - Energy

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      • #4
        Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

        Also, enough with the freestyles. I want to hear a full Poyo original song

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        • #5
          Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

          Yall Really Aint Like The Lyrics. I Thought They Fit The Beat Very Well Lol. Anyways Thanks For The Feed, & Mykill Im Workin On My First Original Song Its Called Blazed Its Just A Chill Laid Back Song. Whats Your Email I Wanna Get Your Opinion On What I Got So Far.
          twitter.com/basedpoyo

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          • #6
            Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

            I liked ya lyrics, bruh. I fucks with this.

            Lil Wayne, Drake, Chance the Rapper, Skooly, Rich Homie Quan, 2 Chainz.

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            • #7
              Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

              Just upload it to like hulkshare and send me a link through a PM

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              • #8
                Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

                Originally posted by mykill View Post
                Also, enough with the freestyles. I want to hear a full Poyo original song
                some dudes are better at freestylin then actual song writin

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                • #9
                  Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

                  This song goes bruh! I think you may have found your style (Think, Record, Think, Record).. haha! But lyrics dope, flow on point, everything dope! Keep it up!

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                  • #10
                    Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

                    Best Rapper On This Site Hands Down

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                    • #11
                      Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

                      didn't like it tbh

                      I hate them thirsty bitches
                      Cut them off like circumcision
                      -Lil Wayne

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                      • #12
                        Re: Poyo - Peso Freestyle

                        Originally posted by @TygaHQ View Post
                        Best Rapper On This Site Hands Down
                        Can we stop this trolling shit cause it gets me confused.

                        When I post a song, and people say its good, I never know if its a lie. -_-

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