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    I am a boss, nah im like C.E.O
    And I will sack you tell ya C.U later,
    I stack paper pockets look like libraries,
    Yall all talk, yall just yellow bellies,
    Bunch a bitches aint rappers yall fairies,
    Make money eat money, fucker you just eat berries,
    I murder beats, hooks and fake rappers,
    Ur picture will appear on a milk carton,
    This aint a cartoon bitch I make fight songs and car tunes,
    Like sink yo career wit a harpoon, killer like Charlie sheen,
    This is my platoon, ima burst yo like a helium balloon,
    Watch float to the sky even then yo not on my level

    Aight, im so more advanced than you, you like sega,
    Im more like terminator and transformers too,
    See I stay like tattoos, don’t got to evolve cos ima shark,
    Tha great white, my rhymes tight like vise grip,
    Im captain of the boat, get off my ship,
    Tie bricks too ya so u don’t float,
    Bitch your rhymes don’t exist like nice plaid,
    N ure flow exists like mermaids,
    My rhymes so naughtical baby I be like
    i be like im simply phenomenal

    what you think?
    cheers

  • #2
    Re: tell me what you think

    Its not bad at all. Some lines didnt really work in my opinion. Overall decent though.

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    • #3
      Re: tell me what you think

      hey man, apprecciated.

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