Shawn Mays - Mind Right(w/TRIP x Valdrin Lamont x P.LO)

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Shawn Mays - Mind Right (Ft. TRIP, P.Lo, & Valdrin Lamont) -FREE DOWNLOAD- by P.Lowe on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free
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Re: Shawn Mays - Mind Right(w/TRIP x Valdrin Lamont x P.LO)

Nice!! Murked it. Great beat choice too.

[mykill]

Re: Shawn Mays - Mind Right(w/TRIP x Valdrin Lamont x P.LO)

Mays // Flow/Delivery: B // Lyrics: C+

Overall: 3.5/5, Mastering seems to be on point. First guy's Flow and Delivery is good. Lyrics are ok though. Mastering seems to fall off at the chorus. Very robotic. Plus that hook is bleh. Not really appealing. Very hype, crunk ass lyrics on your verse. The random yelling, super reverbed and delayed though. :-/ not something that makes me wanna keep listening. Work on those metaphors more. Take your engineer and get him to call the fuck down on the effects. They're good, and used in the appropriate parts, but some times they are over used. Just needs to be adjusted a little.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Shawn Mays - Mind Right(w/TRIP x Valdrin Lamont x P.LO)

Lol the intro was nice. First guy had a really great flow. Hood style but it stood out. Me and Nickz were talking about how hard it is for hood niggas to stand out cause there's so many out there. He was good though. Had some clever lines too, like the nipples line lol. Random auto tune on yours lol. But I liked it. Like when Wayne use to randomly bring that shit out lol. I feel like that's kinda riding that Future shit though lol. Didn't really lke third guy lol. Good track overall but I think you should've gone last. Last guy brought the track down imo.