R&B Instrumental - First attempt - all feedback appreciated :)

[mp8701]

hey...

as the title of the thread suggests, this was my first attempt at putting a song together..
all instruments except for the keys are VSTs..

xxxMeL1SsAxxx's Channel - YouTube

appreciate any and all feedback..

thanks
xx

ps.. if you get a chance let me know what you also think of my play over of Lil Wayne's Lollipop.. just me mucking around
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eWPh_..._M7AHPXmmVOh7U

Feedback 1:http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/sho....php?p=767798\
Feedback 2:http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...wow-new-set-up.

[MC_Crary]

Re: R&B Instrumental - First attempt - all feedback appreciated

For a first attempt this is amazing. The sample sets it off. Drums are simple but good. I could see this as something I'd wanna rap on. Good track dude.

[mp8701]

Re: R&B Instrumental - First attempt - all feedback appreciated

For a first attempt this is amazing. The sample sets it off. Drums are simple but good. I could see this as something I'd wanna rap on. Good track dude.

thank you.. i really appreciate it ..

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: R&B Instrumental - First attempt - all feedback appreciated

I think this is dope like crary said dont really see anyone rapping over it tho but i can def see an r&b joint

[pgathriller]

Re: R&B Instrumental - First attempt - all feedback appreciated

This is dope; I'm really diggin the panned drums, gives the beat a great wideness and just gives it a ton of room to breathe which works really well for something nice and relaxing like this -- dope job man, I can definitely vibe with something like this


P.S. those pizzicatos strings in the background are super dope!

[ProBitaz.]

Re: R&B Instrumental - First attempt - all feedback appreciated

Really dope! I digg it!

[mp8701]

I think this is dope like crary said dont really see anyone rapping over it tho but i can def see an r&b joint

Thanks.. N tks for the sub

---------- Post added at 02:24 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:19 PM ----------

This is dope; I'm really diggin the panned drums, gives the beat a great wideness and just gives it a ton of room to breathe which works really well for something nice and relaxing like this -- dope job man, I can definitely vibe with something like this


P.S. those pizzicatos strings in the background are super dope!

Tks.. That's great not bad for a girl who didn't know what she was doing huh?

---------- Post added at 02:25 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:24 PM ----------

Really dope! I digg it!

Tks.. Glad u liked it.. Hopefully there'll be more where that came from soon