Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

[DatWeezy]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

Finally some feed! Thanks everyone for the feed and giving us some pointers..

The quality is so much better now because of the new mic, and we just now started editing are shit. It used to be straight RAW shit lol, no cutting or editing.

but thanks again for the feed and be sure to look out for the tape!

[mykill]

Re: Till I Collapse - Hard Knock Clique

Friend Zone // Flow: C // Lyrics: D
A-Mitch // Flow: B- // Lyrics: C
Lil Trev // Flow: // Lyrics: C

Overall: 3/5, Friend Zone needs to work on his lyrics. Flow was very robotic. Delivery and energy was good though. Those nursery rhyme raps aint gonna work though. Mitch ran into the beat hard though. Good energy. Lyrics were bleh, but his flow was decent. Better than FZ's. Way better. #GoMitch. Trev, you did your thing too. Hate to say it, but you shoulda dropped FZ from this and just did verse 1. Lyrics werent that fantastic, but your flow was ok and your delivery was alright. Mediocre track really. Highlight was Mitch's verse. I like the solidarity you guys have. You work pretty well together. Step yourselves up lyrically. Work on FZ's flow and you can potentially make some hot shit.