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Background - College kid with too much time on my hands lol.. I have been freestyling for almost 2 years and recently have been trying my hand at writing sum shit. I dont have enough money to buy a mic right now so im using my laptop mic and am just picking out "fun" instrumentals from various places. This is the first of many songs so please tell me what you think! Where I can improve etc.. In fact ANY FEEDBACK is welcome!
Link - http://www.zshare.net/audio/62709190ea6f5103/ Savages - Zach Jones
Lyrics -
savages, daugter damagers
i love my pussy meat samaches
yo daddy, got ur baby on camaras
choppin up that pussy better than a couple samaris
no amateurs, i run it by myself no managers
only raw dog, i hope she miscarriges
if not i need a chainsaw n a couple big bandages
rap sum rope around her ankles n hang her from the canopizz
rearrange her body leave her lookin like a platopiss
ima outta this, shudda stayed at home n smoked sum canabis
instead im hear crackin her head like a fresh can of brisk
poppa try to counter this, better bring the carinas
like a pack of wild dogs i was jus ravinus
so was she untill she got the head neck saverance
hundred percent beast, no extra additives
my home is in the labyrinths
my flow is now elaborate
you wana see your babies head, jus check up in my cabinets
sick up in the head, type to stickin em in the leg,
leave em crippled with a peg, take a sickle to their neck
take the head n play soccer, take the peg n play hockey
take the body to the freezer n beat it like rocky
cut it into pieces n leave it in ur locker
fuck the ER i will kill every doctor
ima maniac ya crazy off my rocker
shakin up the game like marrachas
put ur face in the propellers on a copter
bodys lien on the floor n ur head fall on top ya
the devil talks to me, dont worry hells got ya
im notcha, avegerage, army war stategist
search n find a badder bitch
you dont need no analysit
to tell you i beat u in every fuckin battle bitch
u trippin like sum cattle shit
n gayer than the fellowship
im smokin like im with olympic gold medealists
SHOUTS TO BLUE CITY ON THIS CRAZY INSTRUMENTAL!!!
Background - College kid with too much time on my hands lol.. I have been freestyling for almost 2 years and recently have been trying my hand at writing sum shit. I dont have enough money to buy a mic right now so im using my laptop mic and am just picking out "fun" instrumentals from various places. This is the first of many songs so please tell me what you think! Where I can improve etc.. In fact ANY FEEDBACK is welcome!
Link - http://www.zshare.net/audio/62709190ea6f5103/ Savages - Zach Jones
Lyrics -
savages, daugter damagers
i love my pussy meat samaches
yo daddy, got ur baby on camaras
choppin up that pussy better than a couple samaris
no amateurs, i run it by myself no managers
only raw dog, i hope she miscarriges
if not i need a chainsaw n a couple big bandages
rap sum rope around her ankles n hang her from the canopizz
rearrange her body leave her lookin like a platopiss
ima outta this, shudda stayed at home n smoked sum canabis
instead im hear crackin her head like a fresh can of brisk
poppa try to counter this, better bring the carinas
like a pack of wild dogs i was jus ravinus
so was she untill she got the head neck saverance
hundred percent beast, no extra additives
my home is in the labyrinths
my flow is now elaborate
you wana see your babies head, jus check up in my cabinets
sick up in the head, type to stickin em in the leg,
leave em crippled with a peg, take a sickle to their neck
take the head n play soccer, take the peg n play hockey
take the body to the freezer n beat it like rocky
cut it into pieces n leave it in ur locker
fuck the ER i will kill every doctor
ima maniac ya crazy off my rocker
shakin up the game like marrachas
put ur face in the propellers on a copter
bodys lien on the floor n ur head fall on top ya
the devil talks to me, dont worry hells got ya
im notcha, avegerage, army war stategist
search n find a badder bitch
you dont need no analysit
to tell you i beat u in every fuckin battle bitch
u trippin like sum cattle shit
n gayer than the fellowship
im smokin like im with olympic gold medealists
SHOUTS TO BLUE CITY ON THIS CRAZY INSTRUMENTAL!!!
I got more shit coming soon.. This aint the best quality i know but i'm trying to get some studio time somehow, or at least some higher quality equippment haha If anyone wana get on a verse with me sometime we can easily do it through email or something! 
holla
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