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    #stopsleepin A freestyle I did a couple weeks ago...you know the lingo No pen/pencil no paper just goin in if you been fuckn wit me you gon continue fuckn wit me if u never heard of me...u probably gon fuck wit me after this Leave FEEDBACK!

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    Last edited by Checkmatemuzick; 02-03-2012, 05:15 PM.

  • #2
    Re: Stop Sleepin Freestyle

    +: good lyrics, nice punches. good vibe and energy. Great delivery.
    -: some of the vocal mastering sounds off. the adlibs are good, but the vocals kind of sound really low in the beginning

    Overall: 4/5, solid freestyle. checkmate always goes hard regardless. if you sleepin', you better wake up

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    • #3
      Re: Stop Sleepin Freestyle

      Flow n delivery was on point, punches were ill, lyrics fit the vibe of the beat perfect. Mix was pretty good, levels on the vocal were a little low tho. But you def did ya thing man. 3/5

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      • #4
        Re: Stop Sleepin Freestyle

        +: Flow was good, liked the lyrics. Really good freestyle in my eyes. Beat made the vibe perfect. Quality was good.
        -: Sounded low, mastering needs work. I was looking for it to be longer, the ending surprised me lol.
        Overall: 4/5 good job

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        • #5
          Re: Stop Sleepin Freestyle

          Flow was def dope and the lyrics were decent.
          The beat was dope as fuck too.
          I just feel like the quality was a lil off, idk if it was because the volume of the beat or the vocals but something was off.
          Overall 3.7/5 .. Keep up fam!

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          • #6
            Re: Stop Sleepin Freestyle

            appreciate the feedback homie niggas say I sound mainstream but I cant help the way I sound its sincere and real 2 myself bottom line alot ppl gon die in dey sleep for sleepin on me #stopsleepin coming soon!
            Originally posted by mykill View Post
            +: good lyrics, nice punches. good vibe and energy. Great delivery.
            -: some of the vocal mastering sounds off. the adlibs are good, but the vocals kind of sound really low in the beginning

            Overall: 4/5, solid freestyle. checkmate always goes hard regardless. if you sleepin', you better wake up


            ---------- Post added at 04:05 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:02 PM ----------

            thanks for the feedback the vocals were low because this is the rough version it hasn't been mixed and its a snippet its actually 48 bars but ima release the whole version wit the video in march #stopsleepin coming soon!
            Originally posted by DilemmaHipHop View Post
            Flow n delivery was on point, punches were ill, lyrics fit the vibe of the beat perfect. Mix was pretty good, levels on the vocal were a little low tho. But you def did ya thing man. 3/5


            ---------- Post added at 04:07 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:05 PM ----------

            appreciate the feedback homie expect to hear a few more its all off this mixtape im putting together called #stopsleepin just fuck wit me
            Originally posted by cGrumm View Post
            +: Flow was good, liked the lyrics. Really good freestyle in my eyes. Beat made the vibe perfect. Quality was good.
            -: Sounded low, mastering needs work. I was looking for it to be longer, the ending surprised me lol.
            Overall: 4/5 good job

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            • #7
              Re: Stop Sleepin Freestyle

              Shits hot man. Sick punchlines and you got that old T.I vibe. Quality was a little low but you said you're fixin that so good shit.


              4/5

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