zaye - new wu freestyle

[xwiley22]

ZaYe - New Wu Freestyle - YouTube

please listen support ans sub if u have an account. any feedback would be great. thanks

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[oSkimp]

Re: zaye - new wu freestyle

I like your flow and this is a beast instrumental. Overall 9/10 good rhymes, good job.

[xwiley22]

Re: zaye - new wu freestyle

thanks man i sappreciate that

[Cli-City]

Re: zaye - new wu freestyle

Great instrumental choice......honestly I really enjoyed this shit....your flow is a little choppy...but it wasnt bad enough to turn me off...your lyrics is probably the weakest part......I expected some dope old school hip hop shit on this....but overall a good attempt........keep rapping you got potential.....

Deliver 3/5
Lyrics 2.5/5
Flow 2.5/5

Overall 2.8/5

[pgathriller]

Re: zaye - new wu freestyle

I dig it; recording is rough, but you got a nice presence on the mic and those little doubles you've got in there are sick. Some of the flow needs some tightening up like on the phrases "man these haters can get bars like childs on mars" and "my uncle told me rep that dog where-ever....i go", overall it's definitely not bad but could be cleaned up a bit; keep at it though man, better than a lot of other stuff I hear

[xwiley22]

Re: zaye - new wu freestyle

i jus wanna thank everyone who listened and showed feedback it means alot