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    This is just a verse I wrote for Tech N9ne ft. Hopsin and B.O.B- Am I a Psycho.. This actually took me a day to write and I might record it one day. I sorta liked writing it because I could say whatever the fuck I wanted to since its pretty much a song about being a crazy mothereffer.... haha

    Ponderin' asking myself questions
    wonderin' If I'll get in heaven
    Get where I'm at? get to steppin
    before I'm gettin you with this weapon
    I'm spanking my primate
    to people on facebook that I hate
    that make me irate
    and my hate dilates
    my brain gyrates
    Looking at girls I'd rape
    Leave 'em to dehydrate
    I Make them slap me in my face
    When my age is 40 I'll be 5'8
    Forget a fine steak
    Bitches organs on my plate
    not californ i a
    mentally ill is my state
    come get a light taste
    of my snake
    I can feel my brain vibrate
    fuckin migraine
    Roofies on lightweights
    Wearing Iceskates
    goin dumb
    flowin till my throat is numb
    even then ive only begun
    goin from showin punks
    how flowins done to
    throwin em to the floor for fun
    im cool like im frozen son
    snowcone im cold as one
    venomus drink that potion come
    dive in the ocean im sick throwin up
    chosen one think you'll beat me?
    you must be smokin summ
    rollin up and blowin blunts
    lines leave em heart broken sprung
    flow provokin em
    your ho showin love
    make them face fears... joe rogan 'em

    longest verse I've written ever so far.
    YoungMoneyBeast

  • #2
    Re: Am I a Psycho verse

    Gay as fk. Wtf.

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    • #3
      Re: Am I a Psycho verse

      Starts off well, gets a little wack, then gets better again. You should do longer bars. In your case 2 bars were the size of one. Also try to rhyme more words like - I wish I could pause time and fuck you, but I rather stick my dick into a vacuum. Ignore those lyrics. Solid 3,5/5

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      • #4
        Re: Am I a Psycho verse

        Originally posted by KidComet View Post
        Gay as fk. Wtf.
        Says the guy who's avatar is a Hotdog getting his face cummed on...
        YoungMoneyBeast

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        • #5
          Re: Am I a Psycho verse

          Originally posted by YoungMoneyBeast View Post
          Says the guy who's avatar is a Hotdog getting his face cummed on...
          dont worry he a faggot.
          but damn the start of the verse is so dope

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