Poyo - Riot Freestyle *******Updated Studio Version********

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Finally got a chance to hit a good studio other than the shitty set up i have at my house so ima start re releasing some of my better tracks and verses, then ima get back on my grind

Poyo - Riot Freestyle - YouTube


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[KidComet]

Re: Poyo - Riot Freestyle *******Updated Studio Version********

Do you rap with something in your mouth?

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

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Other than my teeth and tongue, nahh

[mykill]

Re: Poyo - Riot Freestyle *******Updated Studio Version********

vocals still sound funny. not your voice or anything, just dont sound like they are good quality. sound like its aligned right too. you said you did this at a good studio?

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Riot Freestyle *******Updated Studio Version********

vocals still sound funny. not your voice or anything, just dont sound like they are good quality. sound like its aligned right too. you said you did this at a good studio?

yeah its my friends cousin house they spent alot on the equpment its all high quality stuff only thing they dont really have any experience in editing/mixing so mastering is still a problem for me but i think this hell of a lott better quality then before

Also 135 Views In A Couple Hours?!?! Lol Thats Like Going Platinum Based On My Other Vids

[Late122]

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Had a long ass story written but my chrome d/cd gotta try again: Mixing: I don't know what's up with the quality if you were in a good studio. Could be because of the mixing. Hook: You should add some echo and reverb to make it sound better and different than the verse. Also you could add some more words to the hook but it's good for like Tyga style hook. Verse: Yea this need some mixing too. This sounds too hi-pitched, you should try to make it smoother and cut those too high sounds. You could send me the acapella and I could try to mix it. Delivery: It's good but the quality makes it a bit worse. Other than that it's good 3.5/5. Flow: Pretty good and in the last verse it's fire. 4/5 nothing bad about it. Lyrics: Pretty decent lyrics. 3.5/5
Overall 3,75/5 Better quality and it would be 4.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Riot Freestyle *******Updated Studio Version********

Had a long ass story written but my chrome d/cd gotta try again: Mixing: I don't know what's up with the quality if you were in a good studio. Could be because of the mixing. Hook: You should add some echo and reverb to make it sound better and different than the verse. Also you could add some more words to the hook but it's good for like Tyga style hook. Verse: Yea this need some mixing too. This sounds too hi-pitched, you should try to make it smoother and cut those too high sounds. You could send me the acapella and I could try to mix it. Delivery: It's good but the quality makes it a bit worse. Other than that it's good 3.5/5. Flow: Pretty good and in the last verse it's fire. 4/5 nothing bad about it. Lyrics: Pretty decent lyrics. 3.5/5
Overall 3,75/5 Better quality and it would be 4.

Thanks for the feed bro, ima send you the acalella when I get home

[Late122]

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Thanks for the feed bro, ima send you the acalella when I get home

Send the instrumental also.

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Poyo - Riot Freestyle *******Updated Studio Version********

Lol @ you tryna get feedback when one of the feedbacks you left was only "decent enough".

inb4lock.

[Cli-City]

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Yall niggas got to get a lil more creative with yall songs.....too much repetition..........I feel like I have heard this song 100 times before.....its not bad but its too common.....I guess some people would like this but not for me....i hear potential though......

[KidComet]

Lol @ you tryna get feedback when one of the feedbacks you left was only "decent enough".

inb4lock.

Lol that's what I'm saying. Mykill should be here soon.
In all honestly. You shouldn't even come to tha studio for feedback especially if u just started out. Niggas here are too nice. You should get your shit reviewed by the niggas on YouTube. They'll be straight up and tell you what's up. No feeding around the bush shit.

My honest opinion is that this sucks Like if I played this at a party or played it when I'm smoking with my niggas they'll get buzz killed and tell me to change it. Thatr be real honest not being a hater. You need to hear this so it makes you better. I've had my music critiqued sometimes and shit they say makes me wanna quit sometimes. But it does help. I've been told straight out from on nigga on YouTube that "you fkn suck just stop now nd kill yourself"
But shit like that makes me wanna get better


That's just me though. You niggaz are too nice in here. You really don't help anyone with your critiques. I can post the most stupidest song on here an it will still get a fkn 4/5. Like nigga please.



Edit. Ok I listened to it again with an open mind and it isnt that bad. My bad.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Riot Freestyle *******Updated Studio Version********

Lol that's what I'm saying. Mykill should be here soon.
In all honestly. You shouldn't even come to tha studio for feedback especially if u just started out. Niggas here are too nice. You should get your shit reviewed by the niggas on YouTube. They'll be straight up and tell you what's up. No feeding around the bush shit.

My honest opinion is that this sucks Like if I played this at a party or played it when I'm smoking with my niggas they'll get buzz killed and tell me to change it. Thatr be real honest not being a hater. You need to hear this so it makes you better. I've had my music critiqued sometimes and shit they say makes me wanna quit sometimes. But it does help. I've been told straight out from on nigga on YouTube that "you fkn suck just stop now nd kill yourself"
But shit like that makes me wanna get better


That's just me though. You niggaz are too nice in here. You really don't help anyone with your critiques. I can post the most stupidest song on here an it will still get a fkn 4/5. Like nigga please.



Edit. Ok I listened to it again with an open mind and it isnt that bad. My bad.

The decent enoygh comment is just me returning the favor of you not really giving me any feed other than I'm some shit. Check all my other feed I give a more in depth opinion. I'll go back and review it though. But as for people being to nice I somewhat agree, but I know in my case I think people are fairly critical of le sometimes. I respect you for voicing your honest opinion of me. And I hope to continually get better and maybe one day you gonna fuck with me, but you are kinda coming off as a hater when you always doubt if other people actually like me, like why do you.really care. I honestly don't think your good at all not in the slightest bit but you don't see me tryn discredit the opinion of people who actually enjoy you ill state my opinion then leave. But like I said I respect you voicing your opinion of my songs but your opinion doesnt equal fact. And also check all my vids the youtibe comments are pretty positive for the most part.