Dilemma - HiiiPower (Kendrick Lamar Feat. Alori Joh Remix)

[DilemmaHipHop]

had to hop on this beat, straight up banger .. did a lil somethin, 32 bars, n tried some overdrive & high pass filtering on the vocals to get the type of megaphone sounding effect youll find on this original track in some parts, also "gorgeous" by kanye west to name one . check it n let me kno what you think . download link & lyrics in vid description . check out my various fan pages (fb, twitter, etc.) if youre feelin this to show support, id rlly appreciate it . thnx in advance .

Dilemma - HiiiPower (Kendrick Lamar Feat. Alori Joh Remix) - YouTube

i also jus recently dropped somethin to "triple beam dreams" by rick ross feat. nas, i made a thread in here ; http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...nas-remix.html so if you can also check that n leave some feedback that would be dope .

rest in peace alori joh

feedback ;
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tch-mob-2.html
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-included.html

[Late122]

Re: Dilemma - HiiiPower (Kendrick Lamar Feat. Alori Joh Remix)

Flow is dope, I'm going to give it a 4/5. It was good for the whole verse. No bad parts. Delivery could have been better but it's alright, I give decent 3,5/5 . Lyrics are good. There's not really a subject but otherwise it's a good verse lyrically, 3.5/5. I don't really feel that vocal effect. A clearer voice would have been better. Last 6 bars were the best with good flow.
I give this Overall 3,75. Keep it going and I wanna check your mixtape when it drops.

[KidComet]

Re: Dilemma - HiiiPower (Kendrick Lamar Feat. Alori Joh Remix)

I heard this when you uploaded on YouTube. I subscribed to you bro. I really fuck with your shit.

I like this song overall. It's really good. Although one thing that will take you to the next level would be if you work on your delivery a lil. You should try memorizing your lyrics and spit then without a paper so it's easier to show emotion since you aren't reading it

[JSmooth]

Re: Dilemma - HiiiPower (Kendrick Lamar Feat. Alori Joh Remix)

Flow- 3.5/5 i think ur delivery is a part of ur flow so with that said focus on ur delivery
Lyrics- 3.5/5 some hot lines but like late122 said theres no true subject and im bog on that
overall- 3.5/5 i def see some potential, keep workin bro