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    Famous - Lil Trev, A Mith & Friend Zone

    3rd and final single off the upcoming "Hard Knock Clique Mixtape" ..

    Let us know what you think, feed is appreciated!

    Tape coming March 19th.


    Verse 1: A-Mitch
    Verse 2: Friend Zone
    Verse 3: Lil Trev (Me)

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    Feed1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post783359

    Feed2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post783356
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    Re: Famous - Lil Trev, A Mith & Friend Zone

    you should do some kind of talking intro during the beginning of the song. STOP LEADING WITH A-MITCH. lol. Until he steps up his rap game, he needs to be posted in the middle or end. Trev put yourself first at bat. You talk some during the chorus too. FZ is bad. Tell that dude to step it up. Make him listen to J.Cole's "God's Gift" and have him recite the whole thing verbatim without failing by memorization before he raps again. Not to be harsh, but he needs to get his spitting in order.

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    • #3
      Re: Famous - Lil Trev, A Mith & Friend Zone

      Lil Trev-
      Lyrics: I diggem, very basic but simple in a good way
      Delivery: your delivery was kinda robotic, like 1 and 2 and 3 and 4, and 1 and 2 and 3 and 4... let that shit ease out when you rap
      Overall: Song as a whole.. not something i would want to show my friends.. but your verse was good. FZ smh..
      -LaNNy

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      • #4
        Re: Famous - Lil Trev, A Mith & Friend Zone

        thanks for the feed.

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        • #5
          Re: Famous - Lil Trev, A Mith & Friend Zone

          Yeah I'm not really feeling A Mitch and the other dude.

          But you did really well on this. Your voice went really good with this.
          Flow was on point, Lyrics stepped up a bit but still need work.
          Overall, Your improving so keep it up
          The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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          • #6
            Re: Famous - Lil Trev, A Mith & Friend Zone

            Im just rating your verse

            Flow- 4/5 i was feelin the flow good work there
            Lyrics- 3.5/5 they were too simple man, wasnt really feelin em
            Overall- 3.7/5 track was iight, u were def the best out of the 3. just keep at it.
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            • #7
              Re: Famous - Lil Trev, A Mith & Friend Zone

              Thanks for the feed everyone, but... I don't get why people sayin' my lyrics to simple.. Do ya'll listen?

              "Takin flight to the top, famous what i'm not, loaded guns are gettin' hot one bullet one shot" -- Does anyone get what I'm saying there?

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