J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

[JSmooth]

This is the intro to my most recent project, Construction of a Dream. Please check it out and leave feedback. My twitter and datpiff link is in the sig. hit em up. Preciate it.


Subconscious Thoughts- 01 Subconscious Thoughts.mp3 - Hulk Share - Music Distribution Platform

Feedback:
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post788153
http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post788140

[BlakeJay]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

Sick as hell! ill give more detailed feedback later..but yeah its sick

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

Sick as hell! ill give more detailed feedback later..but yeah its sick

preciate it bro lookin forward to the feedback

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

I wanna post more music but i need to get some feedback on this one first...

[jrnickz]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

U have it set to private so I can't listen to it without an account.

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

ok thanks it should be set to public now. idk why it changed…someone shouldve said that a while ago lol

[TupacShaquer]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

Yo this is actually really dope, Your starting to become one of my studio fav rappers lol
Nah but on the real this track is fire, bout to check out that mixtape too.
That wasn't you in the beggining right? Cus if it is ... I'm speechless
Anyways, you remind me of j cole a little, maybe its just me
Your lyrics are on point "don't take it personal if i say i dont fuck with ya'll" loved the confidence in this bitch

Flow was really well , delivery went along so well

Overall, 4.5/5, good shit

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

Yo this is actually really dope, Your starting to become one of my studio fav rappers lol
Nah but on the real this track is fire, bout to check out that mixtape too.
That wasn't you in the beggining right? Cus if it is ... I'm speechless
Anyways, you remind me of j cole a little, maybe its just me
Your lyrics are on point "don't take it personal if i say i dont fuck with ya'll" loved the confidence in this bitch

Flow was really well , delivery went along so well

Overall, 4.5/5, good shit

preciate the feedback bro. and thats one of my songs muffled up in the very beginning but the high pitcch singing isnt me
thanks for checking out the tape too, the more listens the better

[jrnickz]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

I don't fuck wit u niggas I guess I get enough pussy hahahaha n the waisting ya tokens line. Nigga plz. Dopeness. The whole song sounded professional n I really don't know y ya waisting ya time here. Keep it up

[JSmooth]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

I don't fuck wit u niggas I guess I get enough pussy hahahaha n the waisting ya tokens line. Nigga plz. Dopeness. The whole song sounded professional n I really don't know y ya waisting ya time here. Keep it up

haha im glad u liked it bro. I keep postin here for the feedback and exposure. this way i can see how my songs sound to people outside my area and if yall like it enough then maybe u show ur friends and they show theirs etc.

[cGrumm]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

I like this one right here. I didnt really find anything wrong, so im not gonna do the +, -, like i usually do. I really like the beginning where the vocals are being rewinded. Overall all everything was good. Flow was good, delivery was on point. Good shit.
4.5/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: J-Smooth- Subconscious Thoughts(intro)

Lol mad Drake influence in your music. Everything I hear, I imagine how Drizzy could've done it better.