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    World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

    Again another contest , This is a open verse one so I'm on the 2nd verse
    If you got a youtube it'd be cool if you liked the video giving me more chances to win
    But if not, atleast like my fb page? SM Maniac | Facebook


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    The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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  • #2
    Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

    Aye I got that verse wrapped up for ya and I should get it recorded tomorrow or so. Where r u from if u don't mind me asking?
    U should take up another hobby if u have nothing to say other then what's been said a million times already

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    • #3
      Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

      Originally posted by jrnickz View Post
      Aye I got that verse wrapped up for ya and I should get it recorded tomorrow or so. Where r u from if u don't mind me asking?
      colombia
      The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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      • #4
        Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

        Just asking cause at times I find my self listening carefully to understand what ur saying. I'm not sure if its ur style or ur accent but when I'm doing a feature I love to feed off the artists verse so it sounds like more complete song. IMO that's why hiphop turned out so well cause I wanted it to seem as if we wrote it together
        U should take up another hobby if u have nothing to say other then what's been said a million times already

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        • #5
          Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

          Originally posted by jrnickz View Post
          Just asking cause at times I find my self listening carefully to understand what ur saying. I'm not sure if its ur style or ur accent but when I'm doing a feature I love to feed off the artists verse so it sounds like more complete song. IMO that's why hiphop turned out so well cause I wanted it to seem as if we wrote it together
          How bad is it on this track?
          The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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          • #6
            Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

            I can actually understand u much better on this track but the one we're working on almost sounds like another language. Once u send me the new version ill pm u with what I think
            U should take up another hobby if u have nothing to say other then what's been said a million times already

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            • #7
              Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

              Wow , no feedback?
              The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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              • #8
                Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

                Originally posted by TupacShaquer View Post
                Wow , no feedback?
                Whole thing is pretty bad. Too bad to even listen again to give feedback. Sorry.



                protect dunston at all costs

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                • #9
                  Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

                  Originally posted by THP850 View Post
                  Whole thing is pretty bad. Too bad to even listen again to give feedback. Sorry.
                  Explain
                  The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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                  • #10
                    Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

                    Your Lyrics Are Good, You Tell A Good Story, The Chorus Is Awesome, But You Need To Seriously Work On Your Flow Cause It Pretty Bad, but Just Keep It Up Youll Get Better
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                    • #11
                      Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

                      Originally posted by @Poyo_Kardashian View Post
                      Your Lyrics Are Good, You Tell A Good Story, The Chorus Is Awesome, But You Need To Seriously Work On Your Flow Cause It Pretty Bad, but Just Keep It Up Youll Get Better
                      The chorus ain't me lol I'm second verse
                      The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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                      • #12
                        Re: World Ain't Mine- Vibez Ft SM Maniac

                        I mean It's not to bad, the flow is way off. Lyrics are par but you did tell a lil story so that was tight.

                        Work on your flow son and the lyrics will come with time, you got potential, don't stop yet man.

                        And don't worry bout that THP dude, he's just an asshole.

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