HYFR - A-Mitch & Lil Trev

[DatWeezy]

Here is a track off the upcoming tape, let us know what you think and what needs fixed please!

We're not real sure about the chorus, let us know lol.

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Feed1: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post794850

Feed2: http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post794846

[mykill]

Re: HYFR - A-Mitch & Lil Trev

Chorus/Hook was whack. Redo that.

A-Mitch's flow sounds better. Delivery is still stiff. Multis were pretty good though

Trev, you did pretty well. You need to stand out better on the mic. Lyrics were decent, but nothing that stood out like Mitch's verse. I like the adlibs he did for it though.

If you guys flesh this out a lil better, this could be a great potential track for your tape. Overall 3.25/5

[DatWeezy]

Re: HYFR - A-Mitch & Lil Trev

Chorus/Hook was whack. Redo that.

A-Mitch's flow sounds better. Delivery is still stiff. Multis were pretty good though

Trev, you did pretty well. You need to stand out better on the mic. Lyrics were decent, but nothing that stood out like Mitch's verse. I like the adlibs he did for it though.

If you guys flesh this out a lil better, this could be a great potential track for your tape. Overall 3.25/5

Thanks for the feed. Yea the hook is so whack lol, we we're just trying to fit the theme of the song but it didn't really work def fixing that lol. We are going to go back through and fix a couple things throughout the song, thanks again man!

[WeeZF]

Re: HYFR - A-Mitch & Lil Trev

i wasn't really feeling the chorus at all but i get why u guys did it,
other than that, i like the first dude better than the second
definitely not bad overall tho

[Cli-City]

Re: HYFR - A-Mitch & Lil Trev

Don't like this one bro...not to fond of amateurs ( myself included) doing remixes of well known songs....just not original enough....

First dude has a lot of confidence which is a great sign...but he is not that good at rapping...Lyrically he was alright.....Not digging his voice but he did the first verse enough justice that I listened through all the way....his flow was the best part...

Hook is wack! didnt really do anything for the song

Second dude started well..I was like he about to go in...then it fell off.....i enjoyed this verse better than the first though.....flow was kinda sick....and plus he said "City on my shoulder"...

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: HYFR - A-Mitch & Lil Trev

I Think Yall Being Kinda Harsh Lol This Was Pretty Good Except For That Hook Smh Lol

[KidComet]

Re: HYFR - A-Mitch & Lil Trev

First guy needs to tone his flow, sounds like a white wacka flocka flame.

You needa floooow with the beat, like feel it, floow with it man.

chorus wasnt that bad tbh


2nd verse..

was better than the first, hes flowing with the beat, he kinda sounds like K.I.D from youtube.

[akkucc]

Re: HYFR - A-Mitch & Lil Trev

I like this song except chorus, it was very bad TBH. but verses were good i like em.