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    Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

    1st official single from "Im My Own Words II"

    Very proud of this record...Shout out to Instinct for nailing the concept I gave to him..and J Smooth for being the second nigga to totally body me on my own track..(Jr Nickz was the first) Lol.

    Please niggas don't sleep on Instinct...nigga is super talented..and J Smooth is the most professional sounding rapper I heard in the studio so far....Preciate blessing this record....


    Download/Stream ==> Home ft Instint & J Smooth.mp3

    Download ==> http://www.mediafire.com/?0mty89cfbt397d9


    Feedback #1 ==> http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...-by-flame.html

    Feedback #2 ==> http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...freestyle.html
    Last edited by Cli-City; 03-08-2012, 10:30 AM.
    Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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    Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

    I'm so happy I stayed up for this.
    The borders should be illegal instead of the people, who were here before the bible and all of its sequels

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    • #3
      Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

      sucks tbh, i expected a lot better wtf is this shit











































      Sike ma nggas yall killed this shit man, shit sounds on some professional level, i gotta give it to smooth for ths one, his flow fit the beat perfectly but cli didnt do anything but add more dopeness to track, the hook is fire also.
      ​

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      • #4
        Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

        Nickz did body you on Hip-Hop. Props for gettin that Instinct hook before me. I listened to your verse multiple times. Rhyme scheme's good but I don't understand the concept of the verse. First it seemed like you were speaking on lies and corruption of politicians. Then you talk a little a black history, mentioned people losing faith in the church, speak on Obama, then shout out Smooth.There's no central theme to your verse in my opinion, unless I'm missing something. Sounds like each 4 bars or so belong on different songs. I liked the aggressiveness in Smooth's Lord Knows. Back to that bitch flow on this one. Smooth's verse was so much more on topic than yours. I don't think he necessarily bodied you, just stayed on topic. Seemed to spit some real shit on this, but common J Smooth verse to me. Nothing that stands out about to me. Well other than the fact that the "I'm headin home, back me in Cli" line sounds mad homo. Standout hook for Instinct. Only listened to this on my laptop speaks so no real comments on the mixing. Sounded pretty smooth for a Cli track though.

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        • #5
          Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

          Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
          Nickz did body you on Hip-Hop. Props for gettin that Instinct hook before me. I listened to your verse multiple times. Rhyme scheme's good but I don't understand the concept of the verse. First it seemed like you were speaking on lies and corruption of politicians. Then you talk a little a black history, mentioned people losing faith in the church, speak on Obama, then shout out Smooth.There's no central theme to your verse in my opinion, unless I'm missing something. Sounds like each 4 bars or so belong on different songs. I liked the aggressiveness in Smooth's Lord Knows. Back to that bitch flow on this one. Smooth's verse was so much more on topic than yours. I don't think he necessarily bodied you, just stayed on topic. Seemed to spit some real shit on this, but common J Smooth verse to me. Nothing that stands out about to me. Well other than the fact that the "I'm headin home, back me in Cli" line sounds mad homo. Standout hook for Instinct. Only listened to this on my laptop speaks so no real comments on the mixing. Sounded pretty smooth for a Cli track though.
          Tried to tell him that but he doesn't agree....


          I approached home as home land as oppose to my block...the theme is a story about Uncle Sam...I basically described Uncle Sam as the person that is in control of my home and how corrupt he is, then I describe that even though Uncle Sam treats us like step kids and like this land aint our home as well..we have people that that fought for out rights to make this land our home...then I ended about how we almost gave up on claiming what is actually ours and ended with "My president is black J Smooth we finally home......that is how I approached.....i know the concept is gonna go over a lot of niggas head..but I approached it that way
          for a reason


          Im trying to leave an impact before im outta time
          so I'm heading home, bat me in cli" - J Smooth
          Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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          • #6
            Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

            Gotcha, that makes more sense. Smooth line still sounds homo lol

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            • #7
              Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

              Idk if its the format or what but i haven't been able to listen to the last few post u have put up lately
              U should take up another hobby if u have nothing to say other then what's been said a million times already

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              • #8
                Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

                I can't tell the difference between the music released by famous "professionel" rappers, and some of y'all!

                Amazin' song! Not one bit I hated bout this. Beat was on point, both verses by both rappers were on point and the hook was on point... Good job!

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                • #9
                  Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

                  Originally posted by jrnickz View Post
                  Idk if its the format or what but i haven't been able to listen to the last few post u have put up lately
                  Try the mediafire link, that one is just a download link though......try downloading it and see if that works..

                  or this ==> http://www6.zippyshare.com/v/48826442/file.html.

                  ---------- Post added at 10:04 AM ---------- Previous post was at 09:31 AM ----------

                  Originally posted by ABjerg View Post
                  I can't tell the difference between the music released by famous "professionel" rappers, and some of y'all!

                  Amazin' song! Not one bit I hated bout this. Beat was on point, both verses by both rappers were on point and the hook was on point... Good job!
                  Preciate it bro......just trying new things and seeing if they stick or not.....but this has quickly become my favorite track I've recorded next to Girl Next Door
                  Preciate it though
                  Last edited by Cli-City; 03-08-2012, 11:25 AM.
                  Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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                  • #10
                    Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

                    preciate the feedback guys. pretty sure this is my first feature with another studio rapper and imo it turned out pretty good
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                    • #11
                      Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

                      I thought u really went in on this one n the multies n flow were precise imo j smooths verse was mediocre at best. not one of his better verses from a lyrics standpoint. I would have thought after hearing your verse he would have chose to pry apart the subject and dig a lil deeper but all n all a good song. 4/5 instinct bodied the hook btw
                      U should take up another hobby if u have nothing to say other then what's been said a million times already

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                      • #12
                        Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

                        Originally posted by jrnickz View Post
                        I thought u really went in on this one n the multies n flow were precise imo j smooths verse was mediocre at best. not one of his better verses from a lyrics standpoint. I would have thought after hearing your verse he would have chose to pry apart the subject and dig a lil deeper but all n all a good song. 4/5 instinct bodied the hook btw
                        Preciate the listen....when is the next Jr Nickz track coming..niggas be taking long as hell..
                        Last edited by Cli-City; 03-08-2012, 03:24 PM.
                        Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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