Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

[mykill]

Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

The effort put into the hook for the song was commendable. I dont think it translated as well as some that have gave feedback would say. Instinct is a perfectly capable artist, and has dropped some serious nukes on us before, but after listening to this and reading what people say: i just dont see it. Maybe its just how the effects are used. Good track, good subject matter, great collabo, but I dont see that knock out punch that everyone out there is screamin'. Maybe I'm just deaf. *ye shrug* Lyrically this was top notch. Way above the average around here. But as a complete concept, I was left a little disappointed.

EDIT: Listened to it a few more times. Sitll missing that "wow" factor. But I appreciate it a little more.
Overall: 4.1/5

[Cli-City]

Re: Cli-City ft. Instinct & J Smooth (In My Own Words II)

The effort put into the hook for the song was commendable. I dont think it translated as well as some that have gave feedback would say. Instinct is a perfectly capable artist, and has dropped some serious nukes on us before, but after listening to this and reading what people say: i just dont see it. Maybe its just how the effects are used. Good track, good subject matter, great collabo, but I dont see that knock out punch that everyone out there is screamin'. Maybe I'm just deaf. *ye shrug* Lyrically this was top notch. Way above the average around here. But as a complete concept, I was left a little disappointed.

EDIT: Listened to it a few more times. Sitll missing that "wow" factor. But I appreciate it a little more.
Overall: 4.1/5

Preciate the feedback bro....i guess we focused too much on the lyrics and not the overall outcome of the track...noted for improvement...thanks niggas....