SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

[TupacShaquer]

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[TupacShaquer]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Bumpin for the night

[mykill]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Vocals are low. You need to stop acting like you're afraid of the mic and put some real ferocity behind what you say. I think that's your next step to becoming more legit. It always seems like you rap as if you're not trying to step on someone's toes, but you really need to pour more feeling into what you do. Especially with lyrics like these. You cannot write something these great, and not put some serious feeling and confidence behind it. Flow was wobbly, but you made it to the end alright. Keep #Grindin'. I'll make sure to catch it when March 25th comes around.

Overall: 3.8/5

[TupacShaquer]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Vocals are low. You need to stop acting like you're afraid of the mic and put some real ferocity behind what you say. I think that's your next step to becoming more legit. It always seems like you rap as if you're not trying to step on someone's toes, but you really need to pour more feeling into what you do. Especially with lyrics like these. You cannot write something these great, and not put some serious feeling and confidence behind it. Flow was wobbly, but you made it to the end alright. Keep #Grindin'. I'll make sure to catch it when March 25th comes around.

Overall: 3.8/5

Thanks for the feed, yeah I'll start working on that.

[MC_Crary]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Lol i can undertstand your words. Thats a major improvement. Just keep working. You need a verse for 16 wishs, hit me up. Im all about you young guys progressing.

[TupacShaquer]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Lol i can undertstand your words. Thats a major improvement. Just keep working. You need a verse for 16 wishs, hit me up. Im all about you young guys progressing.

Yeah I got something for you, hit you up later on

[Gibbsy]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Love the beat that deep story telling vibe i dig these beats, this is decent bro, the flow is pretty good allthough stays similar all the way thru and your delivery needs some work, coz it sounds alot like your just readin the bars off a page, always helps to memorise first an then think about how the words r ment to be makin you feel, etc anways man not bad at all

3.5/5 keep it up man

[Cli-City]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Track came out great bro...big improvement....lyrically this is dope because you're speaking from a real place...but as Mykill said a little emotion would add so much to this record.....Work on your delivery..very important aspect...and then focus on staying in the pocket of the bar...but overall this was a pretty dope attempt....and its good to see you doing some original work....

2.9/5

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Yo Bro, Ive Been Sleeping On You, This Shit Was Real, Feel Your Words.... But Like Others Said Just Need A Lil More Emotion In Your Voice

[akkucc]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Man your flow get better, and i also like the quality.

[TupacShaquer]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Damn actually got more feedback then expected but I see that I'm improving !

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: SM Maniac- Can't Foresee A Change (Off 16 Wishes)

Flow - Eh, boring. Your mic presence is lacking too much.
Lyrics - Basic and boring for the most part.
Overall - 2/5.