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    Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

    Back at it again HQ...wrote this record last night...gave it to the nigga Shylo and he knocked it out..nailing the concept......basically this one is a three part story about bullying...saw a video on Worldstar about a kid committing suicide because he was bullied.....1st Verse - He questions why he getting bullied...2nd verse - He shows how he plans on dealing with the bullying and the Shylo's verse - Shows the end result which is suicide....Tried a little something new on the hook...and experimenting with some effects, and different shit...

    Download/Stream ==> Bully ft. Shylo.mp3




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    Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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    Re: Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

    I love the concepts you be commin up with..Shylo was a nice choice for this...i like the hook too, perfect for the beat..effects sounded good on it...i think yall were great with the concept on ya verses..anticipatin that In My Own Words.......2

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    • #3
      Re: Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

      Originally posted by BlakeJay View Post
      I love the concepts you be commin up with..Shylo was a nice choice for this...i like the hook too, perfect for the beat..effects sounded good on it...i think yall were great with the concept on ya verses..anticipatin that In My Own Words.......2
      Preciate it bro...kinda left field...but I made this song listening to the weeknd and he tends to give off a certain emotion..so that is what I was going for with this shit....the beat sounds like something he would body also...and yea the nigga Shylo came through in the clutch and nailed the concept without even knowing what it was..I just told him to do his thing and he did that shit....
      Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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      • #4
        Re: Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

        that beat is nice but god damn that tempo is slow as hell -- I clocked it at around 57bpm which is unbelievable slow! on top of that the snare is hitting half time (only hitting on the 3rd beat instead of the usual 2 and 3) but I love the totality of the beat; nice and atmospheric with those nice gritty/distortion synths. Vocals seem like they're running really hot, double check your recording levels cause these vocals sound like they're being pushed really hard. it gives them a bit of an interesting effect but it's a little overdone. the hook is dope, reminds me of something Cudi would do, especially the way he says "Where did I go?". The concept of the track is dope and the style matches perfectly, it just needs a little bit of a cleaner execution with the recording quality and such but overall this is pretty inspiring man, could definitely be a nice outro track or something
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        • #5
          Re: Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

          Originally posted by pgathriller View Post
          that beat is nice but god damn that tempo is slow as hell -- I clocked it at around 57bpm which is unbelievable slow! on top of that the snare is hitting half time (only hitting on the 3rd beat instead of the usual 2 and 3) but I love the totality of the beat; nice and atmospheric with those nice gritty/distortion synths. Vocals seem like they're running really hot, double check your recording levels cause these vocals sound like they're being pushed really hard. it gives them a bit of an interesting effect but it's a little overdone. the hook is dope, reminds me of something Cudi would do, especially the way he says "Where did I go?". The concept of the track is dope and the style matches perfectly, it just needs a little bit of a cleaner execution with the recording quality and such but overall this is pretty inspiring man, could definitely be a nice outro track or something
          Preciate the listen bro......actually I noticed that the vocals were clipping a bit...but listening to the final version..I felt like it added to the track more than it took away...but I will keep that in mind for next time....I experimented with two different effects on the hook...I felt like it gave it a spacey alien kinda feel....but it was left field so I know that not everyone will fuck with it...but I appreciate the feedback.....
          Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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          • #6
            Re: Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

            This track is so chill. I fucks with this hard body! Keep them concepts and the music coming homie


            "I stole a Bible, is that a sin"?

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            • #7
              Re: Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

              Originally posted by kryspy View Post
              This track is so chill. I fucks with this hard body! Keep them concepts and the music coming homie
              Preciate the listen bro....I'm really enjoying making music...so I'm not planning on letting up any time soon...but school started back so imma slow down a bit....
              Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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              • #8
                Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
                Preciate the listen bro....I'm really enjoying making music...so I'm not planning on letting up any time soon...but school started back so imma slow down a bit....
                Are u signed bro?
                Hip Hop Ain't Dead It Just Had A Heart Attack
                But You See I Keep It Pumpin' Yea I Got That Heart Back
                So Just Call Me....
                "Little Carter" Or "Little Cardiac"

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                • #9
                  Re: Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

                  There's a point where you're inspired by an artist and when you try to do something just like what they do. This sounds like something Weeknd, left off a project cause he realized it was wack. Don't really like the beat, and SHylo's verse is wack. Just because it suppose to be a track with some meaning to it, doesn't make it a well put together song. When's the real feedback gonna start coming out and the dick riding gonna end? This song isn't even mediocre.

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                  • #10
                    Re: Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

                    Originally posted by Young Mula Fan View Post
                    Are u signed bro?
                    Nah bro..signed??? I appreciate the listen though but i'm no where near that level yet...still trying to figure what works and what doesn't...Im experimenting with different sounds, vocal effect, and concepts....
                    Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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                    • #11
                      Re: Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

                      Good shit tbh,
                      Good lyrics, good beat and the flow was ok.
                      Shylo did a great job tho.

                      Over all, i think it'll be 4.5/5
                      Originally posted by Cli-City View Post
                      Nah bro..signed??? I appreciate the listen though but i'm no where near that level yet...still trying to figure what works and what doesn't...Im experimenting with different sounds, vocal effect, and concepts....
                      Hell yeah you are, you are better then most of the rappers out there tbh.

                      I hate them thirsty bitches
                      Cut them off like circumcision
                      -Lil Wayne

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                      • #12
                        Re: Cli-City ft Shylo - Bully (Take Me Inside)

                        "Is this love, is this love, is this love, is this love that I'm feeling..." - Robert Nesta Marley.

                        ---------- Post added at 04:18 PM ---------- Previous post was at 04:13 PM ----------
                        Last edited by Cli-City; 03-14-2012, 04:29 PM.
                        Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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