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So yeah, please comment on it. Both positive and negative comments will be great! Neg. comments would actually be better so I can improve the song. It's not completly finished, but expect more!
See, I hit my head against the wall,
and I finally knew it all, shit
You probably think I'm crazy
but the truth is that I am not baby,
I know that I'm just a fucking kid
and I'm very, extremely misunderstood
But if I had a shot at Wayne's career,
I'd seriously take it, I fucking would
In this really puzzling world,
you gotta be careful of what you do
cause one tiny, little motherfucking mistake
and you can see yourself on the fucking streets soon
Well, there you go. But please comment. This will be the first verse I guess, if you think it needs to be a bit longer please tell me. Also I would really appreciate if you guys came up with a possible name. Thanks!
See, I hit my head against the wall,
and I finally knew it all, shit
You probably think I'm crazy
but the truth is that I am not baby,
I know that I'm just a fucking kid
and I'm very, extremely misunderstood
But if I had a shot at Wayne's career,
I'd seriously take it, I fucking would
In this really puzzling world,
you gotta be careful of what you do
cause one tiny, little motherfucking mistake
and you can see yourself on the fucking streets soon
Well, there you go. But please comment. This will be the first verse I guess, if you think it needs to be a bit longer please tell me. Also I would really appreciate if you guys came up with a possible name. Thanks!
obviously ^^^ were just examples and not specific things you should change. Another tip would be to start recording yourself (no matter how bad quality)it'll let you appreciate how the lines flow into each other.. keep it up man and you'll get there 
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