JR Nickz is back (Three new JR Nickz tracks)

[Cli-City]

Re: JR Nickz is back (Three new JR Nickz tracks)

Nightmares is incredible lyrically...you already know how I feel about that shit....this one does not sound like you recorded it over for this new instrumental though...(4/5 just on lyrics alone)

MMG Bitch probably the worst of the three...not really feeling this one at all...Beat is a little funky though....(2/5)

MMG Bitch 2......Straight fire all around.....Nickz verse is a standout on this one (3/5)

"They don't call them features when you acting that's a cameo" - Fire!

[jrnickz]

Nightmares is incredible lyrically...you already know how I feel about that shit....this one does not sound like you recorded it over for this new instrumental though...(4/5 just on lyrics alone)
MMG Bitch probably the worst of the three...not really feeling this one at all...Beat is a little funky though....(2/5)

MMG Bitch 2......Straight fire all around.....Nickz verse is a standout on this one (3/5)

"They don't call them features when you acting that's a cameo" - Fire!

that mmg bitch 2 is my favorite as well. Preciate the listen. I was thinking niggas was sleeping on ya boy. Yea i gotta new beat for nightmares so i can slow it down n get the lyrics and emotion across to niggas

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yea. mmg 1 the best one xD these instrumentals doe.....yall on it I swear lol

Preciate the feed my dude. From a lyrics standpoint that nightmares is off the charts. Gotta new beat for it n its gonna come together a lot better i think

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: JR Nickz is back (Three new JR Nickz tracks)

I think Nightmares does need a slower beat for sure. Something he can kinda 'talk-rap' on. Let the emotions flow on.


But regarding the other two tracks. Overall, both good. Enjoyable. But gawd damn, Crary you're gunna have to step it up on your mic presence or something. Not that your verses were bad. But JR got that flow/lyrics/presence thing down, and kinda just outshined you really hard. To the point your verses were kinda just blah to me.

[BlakeJay]

Re: JR Nickz is back (Three new JR Nickz tracks)

MMG B-tch 2 - MC Crary started it off nicee I liked his flow the on the whole verse..beat is ill too..Crary was aight lyrically on this one..Nicks flow was nice as well..y'all were pretty equal on this track...3.4/5

Nightmares - I love the beat...Lyrically the best of these three tracks..Your voice fits this beat perfectly..the full track should be nicee..does it have a hook? I hope you continued with the same type of concepts u had on the first verse on the rest of the song..4/5

MMG B-tch - Nickz murked da flow on this one..Nice lyrically as well..Crary had a nice flow too, y'all work well together on tracks 3.9/5

[MC_Crary]

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I think Nightmares does need a slower beat for sure. Something he can kinda 'talk-rap' on. Let the emotions flow on.


But regarding the other two tracks. Overall, both good. Enjoyable. But gawd damn, Crary you're gunna have to step it up on your mic presence or something. Not that your verses were bad. But JR got that flow/lyrics/presence thing down, and kinda just outshined you really hard. To the point your verses were kinda just blah to me.

Yeah i feel like ive gotten to the point where delivery is my last big issue. Just basically puting emphasis on this word or that word etc. Thats a big focus on my next project. These tracks were more to get Nickz some feed, i just wrote the verses and spit. Maybe one or two takes cause I messed up a word or two. Ive bewn working on studying th verses i write, to make sure every word is said how it should be. Thanks for checking though.

[jrnickz]

Re: JR Nickz is back (Three new JR Nickz tracks)

We were just playing around and having fun on the mmg tracks. I've learned that my flow excels when i don't try so hard lol nightmares does not have a hook but Im thinking about making the first four bars as a hook and getting a slower beat so i can emphasise my lyrics and the concept of the song. And of coarse the rest of the verses r gonna b on topic cause I've learned that my better verses lyrically come from having a subject that i strongly feel the need to spit about. Preciate the feed u guys ill get some more work done when i find a chance to get away from the fam lol

[jrnickz]

Re: JR Nickz is back (Three new JR Nickz tracks)

Biggidy bizzump bitches

[jrnickz]

No love? I need some constructive feedback people

[Artille]

Re: JR Nickz is back (Three new JR Nickz tracks)

I appreciate the feed you left for me man and unfortunately I've been overlooking your music for a long time. This will actually be my first songs hearing from you so I will give seperate feedback for each track.

Nightmares...

This song is dope and a great start for my first song hearing from you. First off, the production is incredible. You got a nice rap voice, but one thing I noticed is that some of your bars (usually the 3rd or 4th in a set) you are losing breath and then you will start a fresh take right after that. What sucks is that you can clearly tell where you stop recording and start again which I had issues on for my first few songs. I've noticed it's better for me to either edit the lyrics to be easier to spit or usually try spitting the bar I'm struggling on in a different way. You're a true lyricist too which I think we are missing around Tha Studio. I feel I'm a lyricist too, we just have different styles. The mixing was smooth as well. When you first came in it seemed rough, but it was actually pretty nice.

MMG Bitch...

I love this beat as well. JR Nickz verse was nice, but your voice reminds me of Dreezy a bit in this one. Lyrically strong besides a few lines I personally wasn't feeling. You had a couple nice punchlines, but I really enjoyed your multies which makes your flow interesting. Crary your flow was dope too. Some bars your voice was too low though. I enjoyed your opening flow and lyrics, but towards the end you fell off in both categories. Just seemed like you were spitting random lyrics just to finish out the song (rushed). Not a bad song though.

MMG Bitch 2...

Not feeling the beat selection on this one tbh. Crary opens up the song and continues to spit that real. Flow was steady throughout. I didn't like the way Nickz came in on this or his voice/approach to the song. Your opening bars were dope, but were executed poorly. The mixing was smooth on this one as well though.

Sorry my feedback became less and less for each song. It was easier to point out your general flaws in the first track than each little error for the other tracks. You are nice though man, hope to collab in the future and that you stick around.