Poyo - Blazed (Mixed by Purpen) - Off New Mixtape

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

Flow - Smooth for the most part. Could've switched it up a bit though.
Lyrics - Kinda eh. Punchlines was all you focused on. Not really feeling the lyrics.
Other - You can tell you're too influenced by rappers. Be original. You got a lisp tho? Hook could've been a bit better.
Overall - 3/5.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

Flow - Smooth for the most part. Could've switched it up a bit though.
Lyrics - Kinda eh. Punchlines was all you focused on. Not really feeling the lyrics.
Other - You can tell you're too influenced by rappers. Be original. You got a lisp tho? Hook could've been a bit better.
Overall - 3/5.

yeah i got lisp lol. you say i only focused on punchlines?

im 18 think about money, weed, and bitches
im fucking high she fucking high yeah we cool we chillin
talking bout how we gone make this million
cuz 9-5 aint the livin i hate the feelin
wakin up 6 in the morning
tired as fuck i should be sleep i should be snorin
3z's

my first punchline doesnt come till like 50 seconds into the song. & of course im influenced by rappers, every rapper is including yourself. but thanks for the feed bro, cant please everyone lol

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

yeah i got lisp lol. you say i only focused on punchlines?

im 18 think about money, weed, and bitches
im fucking high she fucking high yeah we cool we chillin
talking bout how we gone make this million
cuz 9-5 aint the livin i hate the feelin
wakin up 6 in the morning
tired as fuck i should be sleep i should be snorin
3z's

my first punchline doesnt come till like 50 seconds into the song. & of course im influenced by rappers, every rapper is including yourself. but thanks for the feed bro, cant please everyone lol

Yeah but then after that I heard felt like that's all I heard. Like your lyrics are more focused around them if you get what I mean? Filler, filler, punchline, filler; for example. Maybe it was just the lyrics were kinda boring idk. And with the influenced by rappers thing, yeah we're all influenced but you just seem like you're trying to imitate a style too much rather then have your own. Idk. Song wasn't bad though, so keep it up.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

personally i dont see it, like who do i sound like imitating? but others have said the same thing so maybe i do it subconsciously. i will admit in my very first couple songs, id approach the track with a "what would wayne say" mentality but that is long gone, now when i write its all about poyo, how i feel about a subject or my take on something. anyways i do appreciate your input and 3/5 is a pretty good score

[THA GR8 M8]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

personally i dont see it, like who do i sound like imitating? but others have said the same thing so maybe i do it subconsciously. i will admit in my very first couple songs, id approach the track with a "what would wayne say" mentality but that is long gone, now when i write its all about poyo, how i feel about a subject or my take on something. anyways i do appreciate your input and 3/5 is a pretty good score

I'm just letting you know how I feel. If you truly don't see you even slightly imitating on your songs, don't worry what I say. 'Cause you know what's good with your music. I'm just saying from my viewpoint brah.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

Respect Bro.

[MC_Crary]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

I listened to this the other night, but I didn't feel like commenting at the time lol. I agree with Cli, a girl on this hook went have been great. I wish we had more female musicians around here. Know any in those other forums you use? Your lyrics are pretty basic to me. For your style of rapping you've gotta make yourself stand out from the other million and half doing the same. Brings some lyricism to the table from time to time. I know these weed songs don't really require it but put a spin on what you're saying. I don't know about you but I can think of millions of way to describe my relationship with Mary lol. Try personification on song like these. That's always interesting in my opinion. Speak to her like she's the most beautiful bitch in the world because she is lol. I'd like to see revist this one on the mix tape, but improved by all the great feedback you've gotten in this thread.

[akkucc]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

Nice track man.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

I listened to this the other night, but I didn't feel like commenting at the time lol. I agree with Cli, a girl on this hook went have been great. I wish we had more female musicians around here. Know any in those other forums you use? Your lyrics are pretty basic to me. For your style of rapping you've gotta make yourself stand out from the other million and half doing the same. Brings some lyricism to the table from time to time. I know these weed songs don't really require it but put a spin on what you're saying. I don't know about you but I can think of millions of way to describe my relationship with Mary lol. Try personification on song like these. That's always interesting in my opinion. Speak to her like she's the most beautiful bitch in the world because she is lol. I'd like to see revist this one on the mix tape, but improved by all the great feedback you've gotten in this thread.

Yo Thanks Man! You always give detailed feed, from a seemingly unbiased. Only question is, what is wrong with of the lyrics? i thought i painted the picture of the point i was trying to make more-so in the first verse

[Flame Beats]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

flow was good, lyrics were kinda average. not bad but not anything amazing.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

Respect Bro
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[mykill]

Re: Poyo - Blazed *****Off New Mixtape ***** Mixed By Purpen *****Original Song*****

Poyo always be talkin' about the same shit, but damn if he doesnt do it well. Reminds me of Tyga sometimes. Purp did a great job on mixing this. Adlibs sound flawless. Vocals sound studio good. delivery from Poyo loco was phenomenal. a lot of people single him out because all he talks about is rap and bitches, rap and rap and bitches, and weed smoke and drinking and rappin' rappin' and bitches. BUT, at least he does it well. whether or not he does it in real real, he raps about it real real. give the man some credit.

You need a feature for that tape, get at me.

Overall: 4.6/5