Big Ego Tune-Chiizay (ft Codsky)

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Big Ego Tune - Chii Zay & Codsky by The_Sachse_SS on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

im on the 2nd verse, i think my approach was a little too aggressive, but i havent posted a song before and ive been wanting to haha. Ive only been rapping like 6 months or so. My homie, Chii-zay is on the first verse, hes been rappin bout a year or so, so dont go too hard on us haha.

Constructive critism would be apperciated

(excuse the mic quality)

Ill be posting more in the future.

Edit: Im pretty sure i did the feedback correctly, if not explain to me what
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[KidComet]

Re: Big Ego Tune-Chiizay (ft Codsky)

You didnt come to aggresive, in face you shouldve pushed ur voice more. You should work on your delivery and flow more.


And dude, I love how you use multis, that shit is creative and takes time, i wish more people would see that. Keep doing that, keep the multis up but work on your flow and delivery, you should be comfortable with the mic, like its your friend ^.^

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Re: Big Ego Tune-Chiizay (ft Codsky)

You didnt come to aggresive, in face you shouldve pushed ur voice more. You should work on your delivery and flow more.


And dude, I love how you use multis, that shit is creative and takes time, i wish more people would see that. Keep doing that, keep the multis up but work on your flow and delivery, you should be comfortable with the mic, like its your friend ^.^

Just to make sure, you're talking about the second verse, correct?

And thanks for the feedback.
How should I change up my flow?? Just tryin to get an idea on what you mean.

[KidComet]

Re: Big Ego Tune-Chiizay (ft Codsky)

Just to make sure, you're talking about the second verse, correct?

And thanks for the feedback.
How should I change up my flow?? Just tryin to get an idea on what you mean.

yeah the second one, to mee u sound to monotone, which is a problem we all have first starting off, try and get comfortable on the mic.

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Re: Big Ego Tune-Chiizay (ft Codsky)

yeah the second one, to mee u sound to monotone, which is a problem we all have first starting off, try and get comfortable on the mic.

Ohh ight I'll take that into consideration next time I'm spittin man, thanks

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Re: Big Ego Tune-Chiizay (ft Codsky)

Anymore feedback????

Honesty is apperciated.

[Laudacity93]

Re: Big Ego Tune-Chiizay (ft Codsky)

I was feeling your verse just work on your flow

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Re: Big Ego Tune-Chiizay (ft Codsky)

I was feeling your verse just work on your flow

Fasho bro.



Anyone else got anything to add?

[KidComet]

Re: Big Ego Tune-Chiizay (ft Codsky)

Oh ye nigga, you should memorize your lyrics, like to the point where you dont have to read em while spitting, that way it sounds so much more natural... like it really helps

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Oh ye nigga, you should memorize your lyrics, like to the point where you dont have to read em while spitting, that way it sounds so much more natural... like it really helps

Damn...my flow is that wack??
Not sayin your hatin or that I'm gettin offended, cuz I know you're not hatin and I'm not gettin offended.
I'm just really tryin improve, and y'all sayin improve your flow is kinda vague, do you mean it in a way that I sound like I'm tryin too hard? Or what?

[KidComet]

Re: Big Ego Tune-Chiizay (ft Codsky)

Damn...my flow is that wack??
Not sayin your hatin or that I'm gettin offended, cuz I know you're not hatin and I'm not gettin offended.
I'm just really tryin improve, and y'all sayin improve your flow is kinda vague, do you mean it in a way that I sound like I'm tryin too hard? Or what?

and THAT is exactly what seperates us from the top rappers in the game, they sound so damn natural on the mic, like they were born to do it, while we sound like were trying too hard.

When you spit you have to put your emotion into it, that way you get the special connection with your fans/your listener.
Imagine Eminem never going through all the things he went through in his life, imagine if he was just a happy care free kid who one day decided to pick up the mic, and then imagine if he try to rap about all the shit he raps about now. It would sound really fake, but since he actually has so much emotion and shit and actually went through all his bullshit, its fkn sounds real, and thats why you get that special connection to Em when you hear his music..


That probally why ALOT of people think Drake sounds fake and hell, you know, how he grew up rich, raised by a white parent, was an actor, didnt have it hard, and then he tries to rap about shooting guns and shit, people dont like that shit you know.


So rap about what you feel man, be yourself, if your a fkn TRUE ass pothead, rap about weed, that shit will be natural, but if you arent, dont bother,
you get the idea, everything will improve naturally. Just gotta find your "sound", which is what im doing...

I rap WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY better when im pissed off about something, or when im depressed,
Like listen to this..
Shylacapella by theShylo on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

see how different it was from that other bullshit i threw out yesterday

cause when i recorded that, I was mad as fk about something.

But lately I havent been mad or anything so I dont have the inspiration to write anything,

hope this helps lol, i

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and THAT is exactly what seperates us from the top rappers in the game, they sound so damn natural on the mic, like they were born to do it, while we sound like were trying too hard.

When you spit you have to put your emotion into it, that way you get the special connection with your fans/your listener.
Imagine Eminem never going through all the things he went through in his life, imagine if he was just a happy care free kid who one day decided to pick up the mic, and then imagine if he try to rap about all the shit he raps about now. It would sound really fake, but since he actually has so much emotion and shit and actually went through all his bullshit, its fkn sounds real, and thats why you get that special connection to Em when you hear his music..


That probally why ALOT of people think Drake sounds fake and hell, you know, how he grew up rich, raised by a white parent, was an actor, didnt have it hard, and then he tries to rap about shooting guns and shit, people dont like that shit you know.


So rap about what you feel man, be yourself, if your a fkn TRUE ass pothead, rap about weed, that shit will be natural, but if you arent, dont bother,
you get the idea, everything will improve naturally. Just gotta find your "sound", which is what im doing...

I rap WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY better when im pissed off about something, or when im depressed,
Like listen to this..
Shylacapella by theShylo on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

see how different it was from that other bullshit i threw out yesterday

cause when i recorded that, I was mad as fk about something.

But lately I havent been mad or anything so I dont have the inspiration to write anything,

hope this helps lol, i

Damn bro I didn't think of it that way. I appreciate that whole post, it put a different perspective on the way I should come on the beat. Next song I post muhfuckas gunna be like damnnnnn. Haha. And shit I did not think you could spit like that. You should do it to a beat of you haven't already.