Kailez - Die Honest (Official Music Video)

[Laudacity93]

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DXKOyh1MyHU[/youtube]
This is my first music video shot and edited by me. Feedback is appreciated. #FreeAgent The Mixtape 07.04.12

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[pgathriller]

Gotta be honest; not really feeling it -- the track is like R&B-ish but your flow is more fitted to Trap style imo. The hook sounds like it needs some serious tuning, it sounds like a completely different key than the beat and I don't think any of the harmonies are in tune with the others

Video isn't bad for a first go, but it's pretty simple (the entire thing is just one shot in the same scene in the woods) and the effects are a little dizzying...

sorry man, not really diggin it

[Konflikt]

Have to say Im not feeling this one as a whole. The hook is very off puting. Out of tune droning. The video seems like its just one shot with a load of effects on it half of which are nauseating. The verses are nice though.

[mykill]

The Chorus is horrible. Mixed poorly, executed poorly. Shouldnt have used the Autotune. Some of the effects used in the video do go off well. Like instead of the three split at the beginning, I think it would have looked better as a two. It works well during the 2nd time you do the chorus, but at the beginning it just doesnt look good. You need more cuts to different scenes. Just seems plain when its just you standing in the same area. I would have shot some scenes of a story. Maybe someone slangin' on the corner, or a stripper, or something. I know you prolly have $0 for a budget, but just you standing there gets stale.

Song wise, its ok. Like I said, the chorus sucks. Verses are ok. You have good delivery and your flow was pretty consistent. Work on those hooks and improve that tenfold and you'll be better.

Overall: 3.1/5