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  • THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

    Single for the mixtape, Still Here, coming around the beginning of April most likely.

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    Fuck with it, or don't fuck with it. We StillHere tho haaaaaaaaaaa.

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  • #2
    Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

    Niceee..i love this beat..That flow was nice and fit the beat so perfect (Noble verse)..Lyrics was aight too but i mess wit da flow more..the second nigga murked it wit da fast flow..lyrically he was decent..I like how yall went back and forth on the third verse..

    4.3/5 Overall Niceee

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    • #3
      Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

      i can rock with this, sample is super dope, your flow is very polished, but your vocals dont really stand out to me i would suggest adding adlibs just to give it that extra flair, i aint really fuck with the second nigga until he switched the flow then it was decent. id give it a solid 3.5, but i really think adding adlibs or layers would make this track straigt fire
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      • #4
        Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

        Real feed later, Im on my phone and cant comment on quality or anything, so Ill wait. But that beat is nasty, that switch up in Js flow was sick dude. Guess he got tired of gettin murked by you lol

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        • #5
          Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

          I love this beat and sample. THP, you're flow has improved so much over time and this is a perfect example of that. My only complaint is the emotion you put in on certain lines, but your voice has. Lyrically you had some great lines and then you had lines like "Ya'll can't see me, blindfold". I didn't like the way J$ came into the track. His vocals seem a little too loud and the emotion is lacking, but after the wrestling line (which I thought was clever) everything changes. He also had a few lines that I could have gone without hearing, but his flow made up for them. The final verse you two share is weak. Your flow was way too slow and lyrically just wasn't nice on either end, but I like that you tried to build off each others parts, just kind of a failed attempt IMO. Overall, the song is nice, but has a few flaws here and there. Your mixing is getting much better, your flow has developed nicely, and your lyrics are still there... I give this a 3.5/5 only because of the ending.

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          • #6
            Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

            i listened to this and the most memorable thing that was left in my head after listening was the sample beat.
            i dont remember much of your old flow, but it sounds the same to me.
            but you seem more confident on the mic which is a plus. i dont really hear the nasal thing that was heavy in your old songs i heard.
            second guy coulda flowed better. shoulda did more takes. and need better presence on the mic. sound like he reading in some spots.
            i guess you a swagg/weed rapper so the lyrics work.
            EVERYONE CHECK MY MUSIC OUT, AND PM ME IF U HAVE ANY REQUESTS AND INQUIRIES !!!!!

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            • #7
              Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

              Originally posted by BlakeJay View Post
              Niceee..i love this beat..That flow was nice and fit the beat so perfect (Noble verse)..Lyrics was aight too but i mess wit da flow more..the second nigga murked it wit da fast flow..lyrically he was decent..I like how yall went back and forth on the third verse..

              4.3/5 Overall Niceee
              I know the lyrics aren't on some story-telling tip but I personally think they're just better then alright, but I guess it's what floats your boat. J$ caught a body for sure tho, damnnnnn. I appreciate the listen man!

              Originally posted by @Poyo_Kardashian View Post
              i can rock with this, sample is super dope, your flow is very polished, but your vocals dont really stand out to me i would suggest adding adlibs just to give it that extra flair, i aint really fuck with the second nigga until he switched the flow then it was decent. id give it a solid 3.5, but i really think adding adlibs or layers would make this track straigt fire
              On my vocals I actually have some adlibs/backing vocals... but I'm still tryna find the balance so they don't sound too loud/too quiet lol. He didn't want adlibs on his verse, but he usually does alot lol. Thanks for the listen tho Poyo, woop!

              Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
              Real feed later, Im on my phone and cant comment on quality or anything, so Ill wait. But that beat is nasty, that switch up in Js flow was sick dude. Guess he got tired of gettin murked by you lol
              Yeah he fucking murked me with that flow. I fucking got murked yo lol.

              Originally posted by Artille View Post
              I love this beat and sample. THP, you're flow has improved so much over time and this is a perfect example of that. My only complaint is the emotion you put in on certain lines, but your voice has. Lyrically you had some great lines and then you had lines like "Ya'll can't see me, blindfold". I didn't like the way J$ came into the track. His vocals seem a little too loud and the emotion is lacking, but after the wrestling line (which I thought was clever) everything changes. He also had a few lines that I could have gone without hearing, but his flow made up for them. The final verse you two share is weak. Your flow was way too slow and lyrically just wasn't nice on either end, but I like that you tried to build off each others parts, just kind of a failed attempt IMO. Overall, the song is nice, but has a few flaws here and there. Your mixing is getting much better, your flow has developed nicely, and your lyrics are still there... I give this a 3.5/5 only because of the ending.
              What do you mean by "My only complaint is the emotion you put in on certain lines, but your voice has." the end? I try to be entertaining to a point now. Since if I'm just rapping like "blah blah blah" it's boring so I give a bit more energy/emphasis into lines. But thanks man. Maybe we'll switch up the ending some before the mixtape, idk.

              Originally posted by YUNG DIEZEL View Post
              i listened to this and the most memorable thing that was left in my head after listening was the sample beat.
              i dont remember much of your old flow, but it sounds the same to me.
              but you seem more confident on the mic which is a plus. i dont really hear the nasal thing that was heavy in your old songs i heard.
              second guy coulda flowed better. shoulda did more takes. and need better presence on the mic. sound like he reading in some spots.
              i guess you a swagg/weed rapper so the lyrics work.
              I told you the 'nasal thing' was because of my mic/mastering lol. You kept saying I had a cold And yeah I'd categorize myself as a swag/weed rapper I suppose, just rapping for fun. If I feel like having a serious song here and there, I might do it. But usually just making music I can enjoy myself. But thanks though.



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              • #8
                Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

                Damnnn nigga that flow change was sick as fk man.




                I give this a good 4/5

                Only because there some points in you flow where you sound a lil monotone.
                This was deff a dope track, and something new that I never heard, the sample of the instrumental was crazy, the production was good.

                I didnt really pay attention to your lyrics cause I didnt have too, it was enjoyable enough to the point where i could just nod my head to the beat and your flow, since your flow was onbeat lol.

                Great job, keep it up bruhhhhskies

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                • #9
                  Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

                  Originally posted by THP850 View Post
                  I know the lyrics aren't on some story-telling tip but I personally think they're just better then alright, but I guess it's what floats your boat. J$ caught a body for sure tho, damnnnnn. I appreciate the listen man!
                  yeah i dont really enjoy the swag rap too much so its hard for me to judge..

                  but i enjoy a verse like this from time to time..especially wit da niceee flow you had

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                  • #10
                    Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

                    The first thing that caught my ear was the sample. Loved the era of it. I love it when a samples anything but your usual 60s or 70s soul sample. The toms beat hard as fuck on this shit. Gave you guys a lot of space to work out the flow with the change ups. I would've like to hear your play with your flow. I never expect to hear a slack verse from you, and you didn't disappoint. I think it would've been good to do the pitch shifted part normal voice, than pitch shift. I don't think you would've lost much by cutting the last part of the verse and doing that. There was any "standout" parts in those 4 or so bars. Not that they were bad, you just wouldn't have lost anything you know? Another big J Money verse. I remember some were he'd just surprise the fuck outta me and this adds to that list. This, like I said before, is the first one I've heard him best you on lol. That day always comes man lol. Really good track guys, something great to get people interested. Mixing sounded really good through my head phones. Like the delay you got going there too. Sounded really pro man.

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                    • #11
                      Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

                      Originally posted by THP850 View Post
                      What do you mean by "My only complaint is the emotion you put in on certain lines, but your voice has." the end? I try to be entertaining to a point now. Since if I'm just rapping like "blah blah blah" it's boring so I give a bit more energy/emphasis into lines. But thanks man. Maybe we'll switch up the ending some before the mixtape, idk.
                      I was gonna say that your voice has changed over the years and progressed more as a rapper, then was going to take back the thought because it didn't fit right in my paragraph.
                      ^runonsentence

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                      • #12
                        Re: THP - Big Spender (Prod. By DJ Carnage)

                        Nice flow, i remember hearing one song from you like a year ago and your flow has improved since then.

                        on that PMF floow.

                        Good shit


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