My friend wants feedback...Honest.

[KidComet]

Nigga is new, just wants to hear what he can improve on and shitttt so be harsh.

Nigga Fish by theShylo on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free





http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...tml#post808800

http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...ft-codsky.html

[Cli-City]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

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[CCB007]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

Tell him to learn lyrics by hard and come up wit a flow that fits well wit the beat, then record. It sounds like he just reading lyrics off paper on a beat he never heard be4 and hes just talkin the words whichever way it comes out. The beat is crazy btw.

[KidComet]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

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ahh come on bro.. we all started somewhere..

[Cli-City]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

ahh come on bro.. we all started somewhere..

I will leave some serious feed tomorrow bro....tired as a motherfucker right now.....

[BlakeJay]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

This the best i heard you spit KidComet!

Oh...Nevermind

[TupacShaquer]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

I thought you were a lonely guy and how you wanted to kill yourself Why are you helping a friend out?

[KidComet]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

I thought you were a lonely guy and how you wanted to kill yourself Why are you helping a friend out?

idk lol but today i figured out the only person I can stand is my ex gf.

idk why, everyone else annoys me. ppl annoy me

[Late122]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

Wow... Your friends needs some delivery. But I like the flow. It just sounds too much like he's reading. Lyrics............ alright for a beginner. I don't really know the subject of this song. The best part is the flow, he just needs to be more comfortable in the beat. Little more aggressive beat next time. Why u didn't post the full song?

[wayniac number1]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

Wow... Your friends needs some delivery. But I like the flow. It just sounds too much like he's reading. Lyrics............ alright for a beginner. I don't really know the subject of this song. The best part is the flow, he just needs to be more comfortable in the beat. Little more aggressive beat next time. Why u didn't post the full song?

lol at this and at "nigga fish".

rap goes rlly well with the beat, some lines were weird though kinda lol

[Late122]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

Explain the Nigga Fish. He's rap name is fisher too?

[Aleks]

Re: My friend wants feedback...Honest.

Beat's from "I don't wanna know" by Mario Winans.