Artille - Triple B's (Featuring MC_Crary) (Produced by Errol Beats)

[Artille]

Yo everybody, I'm back! I haven't been able to record lately due to living situations and my PC crashing on me. I lost all of my music files from when I started, but am ready to bounce back and start fresh. Here is a collaboration I've been waiting to drop for about a month now featuring MC_Crary entitled "Triple B's (Bowls, Bongs, and Blunts)". I lost the original vocals to this track and all of my presets, so MC_Crary's verse and our ending hook probably won't sound the same as my first verse. However, I think it came out nicely. I am also hard at work on my first solo project and in talks to do a trio LMI mixtape. Anyways, here is Triple B's; Expect more soon.

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TRIPLE B'S

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[TupacShaquer]

Re: Artille - Triple B's (Featuring MC_Crary) (Produced by Errol Beats)

Oh shit from the beggining I knew this shit was gonna be fire. You remind me a little of a mix between MyKill and Noble.. Maybe its just me. Anyways , lemme start this shit with being fire. Right after that beginning hook your flow was FIRE. "You only live once so get high and die"
Pretty dope verse, although some of the lyrics, seemed pretty plain? Nahh mean? Your usual smoking lyrics.....
MC Crary went in! and no not just he went in, HE WENT IN lmao , I always loved his lyrics, Maybe not his voice. but thats just my personal opinion , just like i dont like people like rick ross just because of their voice. But don't get me wrong hes trouble ! You guys are really good together !
4.3/5 , I wanna see both of you in more collabs.

[Cli-City]

Re: Artille - Triple B's (Featuring MC_Crary) (Produced by Errol Beats)

After the 3rd listen....

Production: Dope Production...I know we have no decisions on the instrumentals and how they sound...but who ever produced this should've turned up the base...that would've done it for me and made it perfect....(4/5)

Hook: .I would've put Mac on both hooks the mastering and the tone of his voice gives the hook a punch that is missing in Artille's version...You did it a little monotone and I thought it was the beginning of your verse instead of the hook......(3/5)

Artille: First couple bars you came with a crazy ass flow...that shit was dope as fuck..but lyrically I wish you stuck something memorable in there.."I'm just chilling got cheif by my side..I was like yea this nigga about to go....but you left me wanting more lyrically....Lyrically it was average not horrible but nothing really stood out in my opinion....Flow and Delivery wise it was almost perfect...Voice was great.....I would say a little aggression would've put your verse on another level..this song didn't need heavy lyricism so it didn't take much away from the track but if you threw in a couple " oh shit nigga that was dope lines" it would've been great. (2.8/5)

Mc_Crary: Normal Mc_Crary flow.....lyrically Mac was a lot stronger on this one....there were some points I couldn't understand what he was saying though but that was minimum....last line was dope..."here's a tonic and a gin nigga and light it up" ..niggas seem to have a problem with Mac's voice but its fine to me....unique....(3.7/5)

Overall (3.1/5)- Great track overall....good to hear nigga rapping again to be honest....Artille you got your flow and delivery (except for aggression) almost down pack...I would concentrate more on my lyrics...I don't know if you focus more on one component than the other..but that is your only flaw on this track to me...
Mc_Crary you got your flow down pack and most of the time is very solid lyrically but you struggled most with clarity on some bars....I had to listen hard to get what you were saying.....Brush up and those two things and you niggas perfect.....

[MC_Crary]

Re: Artille - Triple B's (Featuring MC_Crary) (Produced by Errol Beats)

List of things for me to improve
Clarity and delivery

I'm really liking the real feedback going around lately.

Anything else to add guys?

[BlakeJay]

Re: Artille - Triple B's (Featuring MC_Crary) (Produced by Errol Beats)

Artille - I liked how you came in on your verse..seem like you were about to kill it..like Cli said you couldve been a lil more lyrical but the flow was straight! You certainly werent bad lyrically tho ..gonna look out for your next track, wanna see what you can do when you focus on the lyrics a lil more..3/5

McCrary - You always give a good verse when i hear you on a track..pretty good lyrically on this one..Couldnt ask much more from you flow wise on this joint..it was on point!..Sounded good on the hook as well..i never really know what to tell you to improve on...i have no problem with your delivery really..you're always good lyrically but never give me that line where i say "Damn! that was sick" but then again ive only heard around 7 verses from you.....3.7/5

Overall 3.5/5

[jrnickz]

Re: Artille - Triple B's (Featuring MC_Crary) (Produced by Errol Beats)

First off real talk mac smokes on average a qp of loud every month haha but to the feed. Artille is nasty with the multies being my strongest skill while spitting i can really Preciate that. Flow also on point n my opinion never fell off or sliced up n that department. Lack of emotion or aggression really hurt u on this one. My advice on that is have fun while u spit and act as if u were trying to b the center of attention at a party. I know it sounds silly but that's how i improved my presence on the Mic lol another thing think of how u want to say certain lines or how u think they should b said so that they standout from the rest. Confidence hooks the listener off the rip. Mac we spoke about what i thought u needed to improve on earlier and the same applies here. Other than that ya dope my dude. Btw ya new track i heard today was a tremendous improvement. All n all a solid 3.5 out of 5 guys. First song I've really enjoyed n a few weeks. Also there's some ppl on here Im kinda disappointed with for not commenting on my shit. Ill remember that next time i go to leave advice

[MC_Crary]

Re: Artille - Triple B's (Featuring MC_Crary) (Produced by Errol Beats)

More feed please?

[Artille]

Re: Artille - Triple B's (Featuring MC_Crary) (Produced by Errol Beats)

When is the last time you guys went and rode some BUMPer cars?

[mykill]

Adlibs are NICE. Beat selection is good as well. There are few people that can stand next to you on a lyrical type Artille. Multis are flawlessly executed. You need to put a bit more delivery in your rhymes through, so they dont sound so monotone. MC_Crary does a great job to support you on the track. The concept came out pretty well and you two did a good job putting this together. Great mastering work, who did it?

Overall: 3.9/5

[JAYRMe]

Things to Improve On

Artille- Need to work on tone and delivery very monotone and boring to listen too. Quality on your verse was good enough better then Mykills. Lyrics fit the concept but nothing "wow" really.

Mykill- I hate how you slur you words sometimes need to work on your pronunciation a bit, flow is ok, lyrics are ok as well.

Artille you have a good voice you just need to find a mic that gives more character to your voice, once you find that you'll be good.

Need to find a way to make the Hook sound like a hook as well neither or you really accomplished that but that mostly the beats fault.

[Cli-City]

Things to Improve On

Artille- Need to work on tone and delivery very monotone and boring to listen too. Quality on your verse was good enough better then Mykills. Lyrics fit the concept but nothing "wow" really.

Mykill- I hate how you slur you words sometimes need to work on your pronunciation a bit, flow is ok, lyrics are ok as well.

Artille you have a good voice you just need to find a mic that gives more character to your voice, once you find that you'll be good.

Need to find a way to make the Hook sound like a hook as well neither or you really accomplished that but that mostly the beats fault.

[THA GR8 M8]

What if Mykill is really Crary and Crary is Mykill and them two been trolling us the whole time and only JAYRMe knows.