MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

[MC_Crary]

High Life and Pall Malls


Hulkshare

Soundcloud

Lyrics
Hook
I step out on the balcony
Think of those that's after me
Live as though it's alchemy, create the chance for me
To rule the average, Live how I love
Choose a bad bitch, that I wanna snub

High Life and Pall Malls
My problems seems so small
Waitin for her call, pray I don't fall
Thinkin I'll ball, but sinkin were all
Let's call it a draw, have a smoke and a drink
Please I don't wanna think

Verse 1
Baby let me take you thong off, As I blow this strong off
Simply I've long fought, to get where we are
I love how a Don ought, come sit at the bar
Everything's bought, no lease on the car
Fuck a chart, you know I'm a star
MC_Crary tat it on your back, when I give your ass a smack
I need to hear it thunderclap
Grind it low
Don't mind the blow Partake if you want
The finest snow, where you want go, forsake where you don't
Find me smashin her donk, them I'm grabbin a smoke
Walk out on the balcony, is life such a tragedy
I beg to be happy, but so many niggas after me
The got it bad for me, but I'm the God
The livin blasphemy

Hook

Verse 2
Bottle after bottle, take a sip and I gargle
Waitin for the next model, with an inflated bottom
Are you reachin out for me, cause I'm reachin out for you
I know that you'll leave me, I wanna see what you'll do
Whether good or bad, I'll love what we had
Inspiration for what I write in my pad
I just want what my dad has
Eternal love of a woman, Someone who'll put no one above him
That's the appeal of this rap shit, If I spit that real shit
The world will love my honesty, and one day they'll admonish me
That's all I want b, love and affection its not hat complex man.

Hook

Yo I'm truly back to recording now. This track was written at least a month and half ago. It was suppose to be on another project that was scrapped. I have two EPs that I shelved lol, at least 20 or so songs to add to my large list of uncompleted ideas (atleast 100 lol). I wanted to get working on my next album MAC. On this one I'd like to take the time to put it together and promote it to the best of my ability. We'll see how that goes. For now, this is some promo. I've been working on my mixing and mastering. Hear any improvements?

Feedback
Big Spender
Blazed

[TupacShaquer]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

I really like this. The first time I heard it I wasn't feeling it, but now I can vibe to this. Although I think the hook could have more background voices, maybe more ad libs? I don't wasn't feeling that hook that much, and that last line on that hook really threw me off.
Other then that Flow was decent, Lyrics good as usual "If I spit that real shit, the world will love my honesty"
3/5 ,

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

I really like this. The first time I heard it I wasn't feeling it, but now I can vibe to this. Although I think the hook could have more background voices, maybe more ad libs? I don't wasn't feeling that hook that much, and that last line on that hook really threw me off.
Other then that Flow was decent, Lyrics good as usual "If I spit that real shit, the world will love my honesty"
3/5 ,

Maybe a little explaining will help with this. This song picks up exactly where MC_Crary World Order (my last album for those who don't know) left off. The last track on there,, Drunk and Stoned, was a very intropective track and this one is also. I'm thinking on life and all the bullshit, but would rather not. So I try to block it out with everything from women, to weed, to cigarettes, to Miller High Life lol.

[jrnickz]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

Don't mind the blow, partake if u want the finest snow! I love it my dude. The progression is appearent on this one. The slow flow is a strong attribute of urs that u don't utilize enough in my opinion. Ur biggest flaw is announciation and clarity and when ur spitting slower its a lot easier to understand and make out the complexity of ur lyrics. What's the point in putting all this time into ur lyrics if half of them go by unheard? If u get a grasp of that i won't even step n the booth with u lol but anyways great work brother. 3.3 outta 5 n that's on an honest scale.

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

Thanks guys. Any mixing/mastering feedback would be very helpful.

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

Casual Sunday bump. Feed on the mixing/mastering from some experienced guys would be helpful please.

[Late122]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

Hook: What comes to mixing, it doesn't really differ from the verses. If you record a second layer make sure it's more quiet then the first layer and add more echo to the second layer. I hear u used adlibs but I don't think they fit to choruses. Also try to change the tone of the second layer. If you use adobe audition, add some amplitude and compression> Boomy Kick to give some more bass to the sound.

Verses: 1st verse is my favourite. You got that dope hungry delivery in that one. I feel like the second verse sounded a bit more monotone. Maybe boost the volume of adlibs a bit and add more echo feedback and volume.

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

Hook: What comes to mixing, it doesn't really differ from the verses. If you record a second layer make sure it's more quiet then the first layer and add more echo to the second layer. I hear u used adlibs but I don't think they fit to choruses. Also try to change the tone of the second layer. If you use adobe audition, add some amplitude and compression> Boomy Kick to give some more bass to the sound.

Verses: 1st verse is my favourite. You got that dope hungry delivery in that one. I feel like the second verse sounded a bit more monotone. Maybe boost the volume of adlibs a bit and add more echo feedback and volume.

On the hook I actually record 3 sets of vocals, panned the second two left and write and switched the effects a bit. Maybe it wasn't noticeable enough lol.

Thanks for the real feed though man, keep it coming guys.

[Cli-City]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

Production: Great Instrumental...Very Professional Sounding (5/5)

Hook: Lyrically the hook is dope...but I don't like how it sounds just like a verse...it didn't stand out at all from your verse..(3/5)

Mc_Crary: 2nd verse was straight crack...no real gripes here except the rhyme scheme was a little awkward but I enjoyed this verse a lot....
"If I spit that real shit the world will love my honesty..it almost sounded like you ended the verse suddenly...I don't know if that was intentional...1st verse wasn't as good lyrically as the first...a lot more simplistic it didn't take away from the overall record though. Flow and Delivery was on point as always...Clarity wasn't too much an issue here but I can't lie I was also reading the lyrics...so still keep an eye out for that.....(3.9/5)

Mixing: Everything sounds pretty good.....verse were mixed pretty good to me...wish the hook stood out a little more...but I guess that would be more recording than mixing.....overall good mixing...

Overall (3.5/5) - Great promo single for MAC...if the first verse was like the 2nd then this would be an easy (4/5)

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

Compared to everysong Ive ever mixed, this one bangs the hardest in the car lol. Theres usually too much air in the vocals if that makea any sense lol. On another note the abrupt ending was not intentional. When i first heard the beat, i feel in love. Wrote the hook, then the first verse. Then i started practicing the hook and firat verse and realized that was most of the damn track already lol. Saddened but not discouraged lol, i threw together a shortend second verse. No problems like that on MAC, all beats have been studied for time limits lol.

[mykill]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

Flow seems a bit better...

Mixing on the vocals is bleh. I see what you were trying to do but, the effect is not as crisp and good as it could be. The hook mastering is a great start though. Take it from that and improve on it. tweak tweak tweak and keep tweaking. you really need to improve your adlib game and your adlib mixing. try listening to some T.I. or Jeezy joints and grab a random song. try to mimic their adlib style and see what develops from that.

song's pretty dope though. the gradual end is ok, but leaves you at a cliffhanger.

Overall: 3.8/5

[MC_Crary]

Re: MC_CRARY - High Life and Pall Mall's

Flow seems a bit better...

Mixing on the vocals is bleh. I see what you were trying to do but, the effect is not as crisp and good as it could be. The hook mastering is a great start though. Take it from that and improve on it. tweak tweak tweak and keep tweaking. you really need to improve your adlib game and your adlib mixing. try listening to some T.I. or Jeezy joints and grab a random song. try to mimic their adlib style and see what develops from that.

song's pretty dope though. the gradual end is ok, but leaves you at a cliffhanger.

Overall: 3.8/5

Thanks man. The feed I've gotten on the track will be helpful.