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  • Poyo - Rocky Balboa (Mixed By Purpen)

    Was gonna be either the intro or outro of my mixtape, but i scrapped all the songs and gonna start over, so i decided to release this hope yall fuck with it

    Apologies To 2pac




    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...errythang.html
    http://www.lilwaynehq.com/forums/tha...so-sample.html
    Last edited by @Poyo_Kardashian; 04-03-2012, 12:31 PM.
    twitter.com/basedpoyo

  • #2
    Started out a little weak.....energy was there....as the beat continued it got better.....lyrically bro your dope..but you gotta expand from lines like " get it wet like a swimmer"...."pipe her like a plumber"...Time to improve lyrically...always try to aim to be better than your last....and with that rant....@ about 1:25 you totally spazzed the fuck out...damn..flow was the best I've ever heard it....

    "I'm hakeem olajuwon, bars go on and on, flow on ramadan
    hungrier than all of yall, bitch im steve seagal,roll the weed im stoned" Those set of bars were fucking crazy....in terms of flow...

    the apologizing shit was wack...fuck Pac...no disrespect but if your the best don't apologize

    Criticism aside..I enjoyed this.....3.8/5
    Mississippi x California x North Carolina



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    • #3
      respect bro. as for the 2pac thing im clearly stating im the best, the only reason i even mentioned 2pac was for the impact. if i were just to say im the best theres no emotion drawn from that satement. ya feel me? lol anyways good look on the feed
      twitter.com/basedpoyo

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      • #4
        your flow is quite good. but overall song is average i think it is cause of beat and all. 3.5/5
        Last edited by akkucc; 04-06-2012, 01:05 AM.

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        • #5
          beat choice nahh man i hate eye of the tiger butttttt....the flow is decent man the delivery is decent its like hype but chill at the same time, lyrics are dope to man, im digging the vibe of the track just ent a fan of the beat at all really,

          Lyrics - 4/5
          flow- 4/5
          beat choice- 1/5

          i deffo like when the flow changes the cheech an chong line is played but it fits nice !! concept is good man
          overall 3.5/5 ude of got higher if the beat was differnt , thats not to say its not a good song, just not my kinda beat


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          • #6
            Originally posted by Gibbsy View Post
            beat choice nahh man i hate eye of the tiger butttttt....the flow is decent man the delivery is decent its like hype but chill at the same time, lyrics are dope to man, im digging the vibe of the track just ent a fan of the beat at all really,

            Lyrics - 4/5
            flow- 4/5
            beat choice- 1/5

            i deffo like when the flow changes the cheech an chong line is played but it fits nice !! concept is good man
            overall 3.5/5 ude of got higher if the beat was differnt , thats not to say its not a good song, just not my kinda beat

            good look bro. yeah its really not a rap beat, just tried change it up ya feel me? thanks for the feed!

            sidenote: that mixtape cover is SICK
            twitter.com/basedpoyo

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            • #7
              I really like the instrumental and your flow, shits motivational. Also like how confident you are. Your voice sounds a little weird though, 4/5 for me .

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              • #8
                Big claims on this track for it to not be better lol. I mean at times you went in, but sometimes the flow was way off. And you're flow's your strong suit. That get her wet like a swimmer line was respectable because of the Michael Phelps line that followed. Literally made me lol. This kind reminds me of some Drought 3 Wayne lol. Coulda done that outro a bit better too homie. Dan Marino had nothing to with the 72 dolphins lol.

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                • #9
                  Originally posted by MC_Crary View Post
                  Big claims on this track for it to not be better lol. I mean at times you went in, but sometimes the flow was way off. And you're flow's your strong suit. That get her wet like a swimmer line was respectable because of the Michael Phelps line that followed. Literally made me lol. This kind reminds me of some Drought 3 Wayne lol. Coulda done that outro a bit better too homie. Dan Marino had nothing to with the 72 dolphins lol.
                  thats my #1 greatest album/mixtape in history. congrats you just made my day lol
                  twitter.com/basedpoyo

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                  • #10
                    am i the only person who was wondering who the two african dudes in the background of the picture were? lol
                    are they the owners of the studio you record in?

                    YELLOW DUCK MUTHAFUCKA!!!!!!!!!!!

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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by lilchukieforeheadbig View Post
                      am i the only person who was wondering who the two african dudes in the background of the picture were? lol
                      are they the owners of the studio you record in?
                      Lmaoooo! the one on the left is my brother bengi, we got a couple songs out together. its his cousins studio, the dude on the right just one of my mans

                      ---------- Post added at 12:13 AM ---------- Previous post was at 12:13 AM ----------

                      Originally posted by martian master View Post
                      I really like the instrumental and your flow, shits motivational. Also like how confident you are. Your voice sounds a little weird though, 4/5 for me .

                      Yo thanks alot bro!
                      twitter.com/basedpoyo

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                      • #12
                        Damn that lisp actually grew on me.

                        You had some good ass bars on this one

                        "Cum on her face cause its good for her health"
                        shit made me smirk a lil

                        Flow was good, I like the way you changed ur words like the way you said "mouth" in the beginning

                        give it a good 4/5

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