Kryspy - Hollywood (Feat. Cli-City)

[kryspy]

Hollywood Feat. Cli-City
By: Kryspy
S/O to Poyo for that advice. I hope y'all enjoy this shit.

Hollywood (Feat. Cli-City).mp3

SPOILER
[Intro]
Hip-Hop became a sport
And that made things exponentially more interesting
And so was born, the MC
A Rap artist concerned with only gaining respect and the
Admiration of his peers after besting them lyrically
Soon after this, beef was born
And that spurred deeper and deeper rivalries
Which in turn, make better and better Hip-Hop
But the bigger and more popular Hip-Hop got
The more attention it gained,
from Hollywood...

Oh Hollywood
Hollywood, Hollywood (2x)
O-Oh Hollywood

[Kryspy]

[Verse 1]
I wish I figured you..
But everyday I learn somethin' new
On the way you view things
Kinda confusing
But you could be soothing
When we cruisin'
Music proving I could make it safe
In this industry
Dude just snorted a line
Now he can't feel his face
CEO of blah blah
I'm ready to step out this cave
My soul just dug out it's grave
I'm willin' to do what it takes
To get my face on that billboard
Some LP's, maybe on USA Today (Why?)
To keep my image real more (Oh)
Let my pockets fill more (Oh)
Sorry I ignore the people that don't feel me
Kuz Kryspy pleases oldies and old teens and vikings
Enticing, it get's intense when i vent
But the tint for my whip just ripped so I'm a bit pissed
I was wonderin' if I release some hit's
Will the media make me rich
Or will it ruin my future
What if I never be heard
What if I'm somethin' they ain't used to
I need a plan B
Kuz this rhyme scheme
Is only catchin' people who ain't sleep
Get'em an energy drink
Put on these headphones by beats
Enjoy these beats
Don't be afraid to think
Excuse if Hollywood starts hypnotizing
Hypno-hypnotizing-notizing...

Brainwash is misunderstood

[Hook]
Oh Hollywood
Hollywood, Hollywood (2x)
Oh Hollywood
She took a lot of people
And now she wanna take me (Oh Hollywood)
She wanna cling to me
Like she is HIV (Oh Hollywood)
Protect me lord, Protect me Lord (Oh Hollywood) (2x)


[Cli-City]

City...

[Verse 2]
Vegas nights when these poverty stricken
Niggas, spend they last at the corner store
And finally pay us right..This is the life of lights
Fame and bitches, money got a noose tied
So the white man still lynching
This industry got niggas pool side slipping
Expecting a hand out, but we still tripping
And no one even has their feet out…
I watch this beat bleed down
Yea, I like that sample nigga
It go "Oh Hollywood, Hollywood, Hollywood"
Is this life we hope for?, is it worth the wait?
Weighing down on your soul, let’s just hope it breaks
Damn I mean I hope it holds up, got my mind my fucked
Can’t even think straight, my thoughts are bi-
Polar, don’t judge me, but fuck it they still love me
Lyrically speaking im ill this shit’s ugly
Girl on the pole thinking maybe she will
Haha
Yea
This henny though..
Let me get another glass sweety
Preciate it
Ungh
My house built from Hollywood
If they said it on a screen then we probably would
Do it
No matter how it looks we running through it
Then we got the nerve to blame it on the bitch
Motherfucker you stuck your dick in..
And the plot thickens, as the lights dim
And the nice rims no longer glistens
Now your frighten
Hollywood doesn’t look to amusing
Confusing because on T.V it looked good
But now your hearts refusing
Dreams now become nightmares
Exposed from reality
These beats become corpses
That’s me studying anatomy
Fuck this Hollywood shit and all the fame that comes with it
I just want to be me, and live the life that I am living

[Hook]
Oh Hollywood
Hollywood, Hollywood (2x)
Oh Hollywood
She took a lot of people
And now she wanna take me (Oh Hollywood)
She wanna cling to me
Like she is HIV (Oh Hollywood)
Protect me lord, Protect me Lord (Oh Hollywood) (2x)

Kryspy ah....
And my dawg Cli-City nigga


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[lilchukieforeheadbig]

hmmm

good lyrics, but the flows seemed scattered like they didnt fit the beat.
i couldnt really catch the rhythm with the way you flowed over this.

---------- Post added at 03:43 PM ---------- Previous post was at 03:40 PM ----------

i see what you was doin with the hook, but it could've been executed better.

[DatWeezy]

I really like the song, but like the dude said above the flow seems scattered a lil bit, but i don't think it throws the whole song. I'm feeling this cool lil joint. The hook ain't the best i've heard from ya'll but it by no means ruins the song, its kind of chill.. Imma download... 3/5. Keep up!

[Late122]

What's this beat? I got same one titled as 'Take It Slow' in my iTunes. Mixing vice dope song. I like the chorus and effects on it. Little more echo to the verse. I think u overdid adlibs echo on the Ima bit pissed part. You had a dope flow but I feel like end of the verse was a bit forced. You know cli city comes with that lyrical fire. just felt you could have went in harder but I guess this is more of a chill track. You made those beat pauses by yourself? Overall good and smooth track. Gonna bump this the weekend.

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

Alrdy told you how i feel this shit dope. i like that scattered flow i thought that was his intention and executed well. cli flowed seemed off at the start to me, he came back on after 2:34 lyrics on par like always tho nothing amazing . cli on everybody shit lol

[Cli-City]

Alrdy told you how i feel this shit dope. i like that scattered flow i thought that was his intention and executed well. cli flowed seemed off at the start to me, he came back on after 2:34 lyrics on par like always tho nothing amazing . cli on everybody shit lol

Really??? Man I must be losing it because I thought the exact opposite..Lol...

[TupacShaquer]

I'll post feed later. And I don't think Cli's flow was off. I thought kryspy tried changing it to much that I didn't feel it

Who hasn't Cli collabed with ? He's fucking ill

[BlakeJay]

I don't think Cli flow was off..they both switched up the flow a lot..I did think Kryspy sounded a Lil off wit the flow a few times, but the flow switches were dope at other times! I don't remember if this is the subject matter your songs usually have Kryspy but I like it..Cli nice wit the lyrics as always

Nicee Overall

[@Poyo_Kardashian]

maybe im just trippin lol

[Gibbsy]

i like the beat!! the intro is pretty decent to, if you added those sound bytes they coulda been mixed a lil cleaner,

flow is pretty good , but sounds a lil off in parts, the lyrics are dope from the lines i can hear but some of its hard to hear, needs some compression on the vocals tho it does sound IN the beat if that makes sense?, try equalising things a lil differntly sounds like your taking to much bass out the vocals, Clis verse is dope!! dudes sick ,

Overall imma say 4/5 coulda been tighter but im diggin it overall!!

[MC_Crary]

Well thought out concept. I really enjoyed this one one. I see where you tried to go with the effects on the hook, someone said it earlier in the thread, it could've been executed better. Kryspy's flow was sick but was off at times. Lyrically you're getting better, which is all you needed to be great. Cli was a great addition to this one. Y'all always make great collaborations and this was no different. Keep the heat coming.

[THA GR8 M8]

Flow - Kryspy's flow was bad. I think you need to write to the beat or something, this flow is too scattered. I didn't like the fast then slow flow; then slow then fast out of nowhere. Sounded ameatur. Hook has a good flow. Cli killed the flow though.
Lyrics - Both had dope lyrics.....
Other - Intro was annoying. Song could've been mastered better all around.
Overall - 3/5. Would've been higher if first verse had a more effective flow.